O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from seren james
I like your poem. Indeed raindrops are a gift from God. Life grows through god's love.
The last line I can't make out the sense. Muse Lord mute, what do you mean?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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I like your poem. Indeed raindrops are a gift from God. Life grows through god's love.
The last line I can't make out the sense. Muse Lord mute, what do you mean?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW.
MUSE LORD WITHOUT CHAOS OR SHOUTING.
Comment from justatuna
You have a very unique style of writing. I'm trying to understand it. What I do like is the message you seem to be writing about. You obviously have a passion for your words.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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You have a very unique style of writing. I'm trying to understand it. What I do like is the message you seem to be writing about. You obviously have a passion for your words.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR TRUE QUEST REVIEW.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good subject, good muse and technically delivered without losing its essence or meaning. I love your use of both internal and end rhymes in this short work.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Good subject, good muse and technically delivered without losing its essence or meaning. I love your use of both internal and end rhymes in this short work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good rite with imagery and needs no edit . Your poem is well written and has good imagery with a picture that enhances the words beautifully. Mary
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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A good rite with imagery and needs no edit . Your poem is well written and has good imagery with a picture that enhances the words beautifully. Mary
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This poem is beautiful. I love how you talk about the God's glow in the rain. I believe snow and rain clean the earth. That is what is amazing. The earth takes a bath in God's rain.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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This poem is beautiful. I love how you talk about the God's glow in the rain. I believe snow and rain clean the earth. That is what is amazing. The earth takes a bath in God's rain.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE PHILOSOPHICAL REVIEW.
Comment from CR Delport
A lovely poem that is well written and well delivered. The message is clear and said in a lovely voice. Lovely art work to go with the poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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A lovely poem that is well written and well delivered. The message is clear and said in a lovely voice. Lovely art work to go with the poem.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CLEAR REVIEW.
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, I accept this poem's message & my interpretation is that God is seen in Nature, be it raindrops, which is needed to grow life, continuously, His power is in everything..Flowing, the message is a cycle that does not cease.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Yes, I accept this poem's message & my interpretation is that God is seen in Nature, be it raindrops, which is needed to grow life, continuously, His power is in everything..Flowing, the message is a cycle that does not cease.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR LOVELY REVIEW.
Comment from Kaine Darcwater
This 5-7-5 poem of yours has me a little confused as to its meaning. However, your words flow exceptionally well, I love a good rhyming poem. Let me attempt to take a guess as to its meaning. You're speaking of God's ways of showing his existence. Rain. Rainbows. Honoring his promise to never destroy the world with flood again. How did I do with your poem's explanation? Kudos. ;)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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This 5-7-5 poem of yours has me a little confused as to its meaning. However, your words flow exceptionally well, I love a good rhyming poem. Let me attempt to take a guess as to its meaning. You're speaking of God's ways of showing his existence. Rain. Rainbows. Honoring his promise to never destroy the world with flood again. How did I do with your poem's explanation? Kudos. ;)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.
Comment from Jendowoz
This style sounds great when read aloud. Good job on the syllable count. Adore the picture. It has a lovely deep meaning of life as some of us see it.
regards, Jen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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This style sounds great when read aloud. Good job on the syllable count. Adore the picture. It has a lovely deep meaning of life as some of us see it.
regards, Jen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Irish Rain
i love the nature-God beauty of this poem, and it is so very true, life is a constant cycle, flowing from God, into nature, trough us..back to God...thank you for sharing.
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i love the nature-God beauty of this poem, and it is so very true, life is a constant cycle, flowing from God, into nature, trough us..back to God...thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR 6-STAR RATED INTELLIGENT REVIEW.
