O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from shy1250
This literally gave me chills. Read it about half a dozen times trying to figure out why it has such power. Half-caffeinated brain is not up to that particular challenge. I am pea-green that I didn't write this! Kudos, and have a blessed Easter! later and God bless, shy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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This literally gave me chills. Read it about half a dozen times trying to figure out why it has such power. Half-caffeinated brain is not up to that particular challenge. I am pea-green that I didn't write this! Kudos, and have a blessed Easter! later and God bless, shy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from closetpoetjester
How dare you insult me in your authors notes Oh mighty Deep Pocket. I understand your need to think you are way above everybody else, but don't be condescending in your notes.
People have a (god given) right to read and review as they interpret.
Well, in regards to your poem...it again makes NO sense except you have managed to rhyme it with some basic one syllable words...WOW. Impressive. Not, I'm sorry.
Secondly in regards to your notes...I'm not devoid of feeling but perhaps you are intentionally devoid of talent and feel the need to belittle those who at least try to help you. Surely God welcomes Good and Bad reviews and takes them on the chin. Shouldn't YOU have a little faith in your reviewers? Or is that ONLY the ones who shower you in fluffy praise? Are you ACTUALLY here for critique or a cult following? Seriously mate?
Anyway....back to those beaut notes...
Sorry,
I have faith...in REAL poetry.
I also have come to the REALIZATION that THIS is not it.
How's THAT for an independent pov?
I'd LOVE a response sometime...if you can justify any of your words in any sort of coherent manner, I'd be happy to up this to a three.
Good luck with your writing. This is not intended to be unkind, just straight forward and to the point.
Not enough people around here say what needs to be said.
Thanks for the buck forty eight...Kaching!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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How dare you insult me in your authors notes Oh mighty Deep Pocket. I understand your need to think you are way above everybody else, but don't be condescending in your notes.
People have a (god given) right to read and review as they interpret.
Well, in regards to your poem...it again makes NO sense except you have managed to rhyme it with some basic one syllable words...WOW. Impressive. Not, I'm sorry.
Secondly in regards to your notes...I'm not devoid of feeling but perhaps you are intentionally devoid of talent and feel the need to belittle those who at least try to help you. Surely God welcomes Good and Bad reviews and takes them on the chin. Shouldn't YOU have a little faith in your reviewers? Or is that ONLY the ones who shower you in fluffy praise? Are you ACTUALLY here for critique or a cult following? Seriously mate?
Anyway....back to those beaut notes...
Sorry,
I have faith...in REAL poetry.
I also have come to the REALIZATION that THIS is not it.
How's THAT for an independent pov?
I'd LOVE a response sometime...if you can justify any of your words in any sort of coherent manner, I'd be happy to up this to a three.
Good luck with your writing. This is not intended to be unkind, just straight forward and to the point.
Not enough people around here say what needs to be said.
Thanks for the buck forty eight...Kaching!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from TonyD
Very difficult to understand what is being said in this poem.
"Grow life," I understand but "move His ceaseless blow" is out of my realm.
Sorry I cannot be more positive.
Tony
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Very difficult to understand what is being said in this poem.
"Grow life," I understand but "move His ceaseless blow" is out of my realm.
Sorry I cannot be more positive.
Tony
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from 9999pool
Faith can move mountains and make men clamor for shelter from the rain and lightning. In the process we can find that rainbow, the life giving water and from thereon, a belief in the miracle of faith with a true belief.
Excellent write.
Bravo, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Faith can move mountains and make men clamor for shelter from the rain and lightning. In the process we can find that rainbow, the life giving water and from thereon, a belief in the miracle of faith with a true belief.
Excellent write.
Bravo, Ritchie.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FAIR REVIEW.
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Welcome. My pleasure as always. Ritchie.
Comment from Ekim777
Forgive me but you have a strange way of speaking even for a poet. Your language is deceptively simple but it sometimes confounds me.I can understand that raindrops mutely speak God's glow.As I understand it, raindrops nourish new life and move on God's ceaseless design. Does MOther Nature revolve around God's message? -Ekim777
No offence meant!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Forgive me but you have a strange way of speaking even for a poet. Your language is deceptively simple but it sometimes confounds me.I can understand that raindrops mutely speak God's glow.As I understand it, raindrops nourish new life and move on God's ceaseless design. Does MOther Nature revolve around God's message? -Ekim777
No offence meant!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR CREDITABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Melspoems
Solid end rhymes and an one internal too
Lots of similar sounding words and good use of alliteration God/grow/glow and move/muse/mute/message
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Solid end rhymes and an one internal too
Lots of similar sounding words and good use of alliteration God/grow/glow and move/muse/mute/message
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FAIR REVIEW.
Comment from BigPoppaJrock
Awesome picture, it helps bring meaning and life to your words. I have found in my writing it is often difficult for me to say a lot in the 5-7-7 type of writings. I really liked the opening line of the rain drops speaking. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Awesome picture, it helps bring meaning and life to your words. I have found in my writing it is often difficult for me to say a lot in the 5-7-7 type of writings. I really liked the opening line of the rain drops speaking. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from fairy77
Liked raindrops and it's very festive:)Thanks for sharing a beautiful piece and loved Lord mute:)Well written and Happy Easter:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Liked raindrops and it's very festive:)Thanks for sharing a beautiful piece and loved Lord mute:)Well written and Happy Easter:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR WONDERFUL REVIEW.
Comment from c_lucas
Generating new life is one of Nature's many tasks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Generating new life is one of Nature's many tasks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Individually I found the words poetic; and I like rhyme. I am reminded of Martin Luther, who prayed and preached to every class of people and for every class, so that all could understand his words... Not just the highly academic. Giddy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Individually I found the words poetic; and I like rhyme. I am reminded of Martin Luther, who prayed and preached to every class of people and for every class, so that all could understand his words... Not just the highly academic. Giddy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR AUTHENTIC REVIEW.
