Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

I forget the name for this haiku like form but like it. I must say that your style of writing consistent. I at first thought that it had been written in another language and hastily translated into English. I now see it as thoughts with minimal words that don't add meaning.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Thanks for thoughtful review.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

I think this is great, I am getting used to your writing now, and can appreciate what you are saying. Your book is going to be totally unique, one that people will pick up and know immediately who the author is. This is well written and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

Great review with grand rating.

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

God's raindrops continue to flow, blow, and grow--ceaselessly--like a gravy train from heaven.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for the review

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Rain drops speak God's glow - nourish the earth

Grow life, move His ceaseless blow - activate mankind

Muse Lord mute; round message flow. - send Son as Ransom
Well done, the resurrection sent the message on it's mission. Garth

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

reply by GarthL on 09-Apr-2013

You have a way with words!!!

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, alcreator, you did a great job writing this short poem about the way raindrops can reflect God's glory, i enjoyed reading it. love the picture.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from adewpearl

Good

your poem is in 5/7/7 form as you designate
good alliteration in God's glow grow
what does move his ceaseless blow mean?
and what does muse Lord mute mean?
who is mute or do you want to be mute?
I hear the alliteration and I hear the rhyme and I can tell this is a poem of faith and I am a person of faith - but problems with phrasing confuse the message for me
Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Cedar

Good

This piece is understandable to a point and then you lose me. I really like your train of thought and I think we're getting closer and closer.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

This is worded simply, but has great meaning. The Lord silently speaks through his raindrops, which are a gift to sustain life. The poem is colorful and inspirational, with a soothing message.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

A monosyllabic poem (except for: ceaseless/message) with raindrops the creation of God bringing life to earth where upon the mute wind carries the message of rebirth in spirit and body..a message from God to mankind. Electic, lyrical and esoteric.

Regards:

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Unseen, indeed that's beautiful picture, that's a beautiful
5/7/5 poem, nice rhyming. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. lakeport.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013