O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Boogienights
I'm not sure what this poem is saying, but I do believe it might be about the way God communicates with us through nature. The rain, cleanses us, creates more life and connects us to Him. I might be wrong, but that's how I interpret it. Thanks for sharing.:)
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I'm not sure what this poem is saying, but I do believe it might be about the way God communicates with us through nature. The rain, cleanses us, creates more life and connects us to Him. I might be wrong, but that's how I interpret it. Thanks for sharing.:)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Alcreator:
This almost reads like a "circle of life" piece. The rain falls, things grow, all for the glory of our Creator. It is a wonderful tribute to the one for Whom I write, my muse. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
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Alcreator:
This almost reads like a "circle of life" piece. The rain falls, things grow, all for the glory of our Creator. It is a wonderful tribute to the one for Whom I write, my muse. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
I've written the odd poem about God's sparkle existing in the sparkle ofbthe dew, the blessing of rain that brings life to the bereft, and the Father who gathers orphans into His arms. Well done, blessings Roy
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I've written the odd poem about God's sparkle existing in the sparkle ofbthe dew, the blessing of rain that brings life to the bereft, and the Father who gathers orphans into His arms. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Unseen!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Unseen!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, yes rain does help grow and support all forms of life and God is the action that makes all life possible, thank you for the notes, an excellent addition to your book****kahpot
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Wonderful, yes rain does help grow and support all forms of life and God is the action that makes all life possible, thank you for the notes, an excellent addition to your book****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from J.R Dickinson
Though a 5-7-7 form, I find your poem is rather unique and expresses nature, God, and their connection in a calming subtle way. It's actually very soothing and sort of reflective, at least makes the reader reflective, so to speak.O My God is beautiful.
Sincerely,
J.R
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Though a 5-7-7 form, I find your poem is rather unique and expresses nature, God, and their connection in a calming subtle way. It's actually very soothing and sort of reflective, at least makes the reader reflective, so to speak.O My God is beautiful.
Sincerely,
J.R
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR HONEST REVIEW.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
your work is so confusing, it makes no sense what so ever, and your rhymes i have to tell you aint that good and they dont add anything to the poem, it does takeaway from it though i suppose integrity. i am not sure what you are sorry for but would like to know
your work though provokes me to write a review. i dont know if that is your intention?
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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hiya,
your work is so confusing, it makes no sense what so ever, and your rhymes i have to tell you aint that good and they dont add anything to the poem, it does takeaway from it though i suppose integrity. i am not sure what you are sorry for but would like to know
your work though provokes me to write a review. i dont know if that is your intention?
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Cornetist
Your "poetry" continues to be confusing. It would seem that you have something to say but the manner in which you offer your thoughts is, frankly, not understandable to the average reader of the English language. If this is a translation problem, I strongly urge you to get a better understanding of the English language (especially regarding grammar and syntax).
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Your "poetry" continues to be confusing. It would seem that you have something to say but the manner in which you offer your thoughts is, frankly, not understandable to the average reader of the English language. If this is a translation problem, I strongly urge you to get a better understanding of the English language (especially regarding grammar and syntax).
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from yonashalom
I like this concept of G-d flowing in the rain wherever the water goes. I'm not getting the muse L-rd mute part, but this is good and has a nice internal rhyme. ~Yona
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I like this concept of G-d flowing in the rain wherever the water goes. I'm not getting the muse L-rd mute part, but this is good and has a nice internal rhyme. ~Yona
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR FANTASTIC REVIEW.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
HARD WRITING IN THAT FORMAT AND PRODUCE A MEANINGFUL WORK THIS ONE SEEMS TO HAVE WHAT OTHERS WHO WRITE IN THIS FORMAT DON'T INCLUDING MYSELF GOOD JOB
TK
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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HARD WRITING IN THAT FORMAT AND PRODUCE A MEANINGFUL WORK THIS ONE SEEMS TO HAVE WHAT OTHERS WHO WRITE IN THIS FORMAT DON'T INCLUDING MYSELF GOOD JOB
TK
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR SUGGESTIVE REVIEW.
