When Mother Nature Passes By
a short poem describing my muse8 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Well done on your contest placing. I am pleased Mother Nature is generous and does not mind sharing her bounty and beauty. Your appreciation of nature matches my own and is very well portrayed in your poem.
These lines are so apt. Your words touched my heart:
and I am moved to write new verse
to touch one's heart, emotions stir.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
Well done on your contest placing. I am pleased Mother Nature is generous and does not mind sharing her bounty and beauty. Your appreciation of nature matches my own and is very well portrayed in your poem.
These lines are so apt. Your words touched my heart:
and I am moved to write new verse
to touch one's heart, emotions stir.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Yes, we both seem to share a great fondness for Nature, Lisa. I am so pleased my poem touched your heart and motivated you to write new verse. I'm always looking for it. Rod
Comment from Victoria Grace
LOVE THIS. I'm a tarot reader, and I actually have the deck this image is from. It goes perfectly with the poem. Beautifully written. Great job love! Good luck!!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
LOVE THIS. I'm a tarot reader, and I actually have the deck this image is from. It goes perfectly with the poem. Beautifully written. Great job love! Good luck!!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Victoria, for your enthusiastic response to my poem and all those stars. I love the painting,too, but had no idea it was on Tarot cards.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like this poem, it's pretty! I love anything about Mother Nature. So, this fits the bill. The picture is awesome and goes so well too. Nice form, well penned. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
I like this poem, it's pretty! I love anything about Mother Nature. So, this fits the bill. The picture is awesome and goes so well too. Nice form, well penned. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Most poetry that I write is inspired by and about Nature. Thank you so much, January, for your kind praise of this one.
Comment from samandlancelot
I love your muse. I've met her, too, but I never saw her that way. I may borrow her a time or two, if you wouldn't mind lending here and there, when you resting.
I enjoyed your sonnet. My favorite - skirt rustles, monarchs flit.
Have a good night.
Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
I love your muse. I've met her, too, but I never saw her that way. I may borrow her a time or two, if you wouldn't mind lending here and there, when you resting.
I enjoyed your sonnet. My favorite - skirt rustles, monarchs flit.
Have a good night.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Patricia, for your kind praise of my poem. You can share my muse any time.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your creatively-written poem is vividly descriptive, conveying a powerful message about how nature inspires you to write. I can relate to these sentiments. The artwork is mesmerizing!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
Your creatively-written poem is vividly descriptive, conveying a powerful message about how nature inspires you to write. I can relate to these sentiments. The artwork is mesmerizing!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Janice, for your kind praise of my poem. May Nature inspire you, too.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wonderful and lovely! Very well written! A wonderful cover image at that. You well executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes in this regard.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
Wonderful and lovely! Very well written! A wonderful cover image at that. You well executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes in this regard.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Precious, for your kind praise of my poem.
Comment from Ashtar Zaidi
Great job.... Brilliant Art, Perfect words and quite interesting, you are a very a good Writer, keep it up, & thank you so much for sharing it, God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
Great job.... Brilliant Art, Perfect words and quite interesting, you are a very a good Writer, keep it up, & thank you so much for sharing it, God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Astar. I am honored by your compliments and kind praise.
Comment from royowen
Well done, a nice even tempo to this marvellous expression. I gather the things that nature orchestrates is the throttle of your musing, and therefore the focus of this marvellously smooth and mellifluous poem, I admire the articulately smooth flow, and the great abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
Well done, a nice even tempo to this marvellous expression. I gather the things that nature orchestrates is the throttle of your musing, and therefore the focus of this marvellously smooth and mellifluous poem, I admire the articulately smooth flow, and the great abcb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy, for this marvelous review. So pleased you enjoyed its cadence and rhyme scheme.
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Well done