If The Jester Cried At Night
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Mind Circles Left By Aliens"A collection of favourite poems by mrgrunty.
21 total reviews
Comment from jannieballiett
Now this is good! No doubt.
Raises good questions to ponder.........
Interesting questions--interesting parallels--the whole thing's an oxymoron, isn't it?
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Now this is good! No doubt.
Raises good questions to ponder.........
Interesting questions--interesting parallels--the whole thing's an oxymoron, isn't it?
Comment Written 09-Apr-2006
Comment from Robbi
I think you cheated by changing the tenses of the verb. Naughty boy you are most certainly. The poem takes us round and round which, by the title was your aim. You are on target then and successfully in your effort. Well done. Robbi
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I think you cheated by changing the tenses of the verb. Naughty boy you are most certainly. The poem takes us round and round which, by the title was your aim. You are on target then and successfully in your effort. Well done. Robbi
Comment Written 07-Apr-2006
Comment from Senyai
MrGrunty, an interesting little verse. Love is a nuisance sometimes, LOL, at least if you can call this love. A well written poem detailing the wistful thoughts of a lover wondering back if the other really ever loved at all. I enjoyed reading....
all the best,
Foxey
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MrGrunty, an interesting little verse. Love is a nuisance sometimes, LOL, at least if you can call this love. A well written poem detailing the wistful thoughts of a lover wondering back if the other really ever loved at all. I enjoyed reading....
all the best,
Foxey
Comment Written 07-Apr-2006
Comment from AmoksSoulmate
Great poem. Seems to be a bit of circular logic going on here. Your words excellently depict the uncertainty of lost love. Great job with this one, truly an excellent read.
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Great poem. Seems to be a bit of circular logic going on here. Your words excellently depict the uncertainty of lost love. Great job with this one, truly an excellent read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2006
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Oh Mr Grunty - so much going on here.
Not a case of 'less said, soonest mended,' but nothing said, nothing understood.
I loved this for its simple truth.
Bunny
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Oh Mr Grunty - so much going on here.
Not a case of 'less said, soonest mended,' but nothing said, nothing understood.
I loved this for its simple truth.
Bunny
Comment Written 06-Apr-2006
Comment from ishta
Nice, and interesting. I thought that the line starting "if you don't love me" was a typo. I thought it was supposed to say "if you love me". Either way, the points are well made. Good piece of work.
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Nice, and interesting. I thought that the line starting "if you don't love me" was a typo. I thought it was supposed to say "if you love me". Either way, the points are well made. Good piece of work.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2006
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
You know, it's almost indecent how much I enjoyed that poem.
:0)
Good stuff, Grant, and, as always, good to see a post from you.
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You know, it's almost indecent how much I enjoyed that poem.
:0)
Good stuff, Grant, and, as always, good to see a post from you.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2006
Comment from Permelia
This poem is easy to read, it flows so smoothly, and the logic is like a
Merry-go-round- it goes in circles, with no end! I hope this is a poem you wrote in London! Hugs- Mona
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This poem is easy to read, it flows so smoothly, and the logic is like a
Merry-go-round- it goes in circles, with no end! I hope this is a poem you wrote in London! Hugs- Mona
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
Comment from Lisloh
Since it ended----no----she never really loved you---Love encompasses all and everything----no trial is too tough---Love should have prevailed...........
Move on my Friend---Love awaits you.........in a realm you've always dreamed of and never came to----now is the time.......be the Captain of your Ship.........:)
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
Emotion is high yet controlled......
If we're not together,
you'll never have to tell me
why it ended.
And when it ended,
I wondered if you ever
really loved me.
No need to wonder is there...?..............
You already know the answer............................
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Since it ended----no----she never really loved you---Love encompasses all and everything----no trial is too tough---Love should have prevailed...........
Move on my Friend---Love awaits you.........in a realm you've always dreamed of and never came to----now is the time.......be the Captain of your Ship.........:)
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
Emotion is high yet controlled......
If we're not together,
you'll never have to tell me
why it ended.
And when it ended,
I wondered if you ever
really loved me.
No need to wonder is there...?..............
You already know the answer............................
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
Comment from Black Wren
A rather sad if circular logic.
If you never asked you would never know if there had been love and it is a wonder to stay together when there is no feelings of care involved.
Interesting poem and great job!
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A rather sad if circular logic.
If you never asked you would never know if there had been love and it is a wonder to stay together when there is no feelings of care involved.
Interesting poem and great job!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
