THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Breathless"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
8 total reviews
Comment from cdefan
Excellent chapter! The dialog is real and believable, along with the romance scene. I'm wondering where you are going to take Carrie's character. How did she survive the car accident, and if indeed an angel saved her, why?
Enjoyed this one!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Excellent chapter! The dialog is real and believable, along with the romance scene. I'm wondering where you are going to take Carrie's character. How did she survive the car accident, and if indeed an angel saved her, why?
Enjoyed this one!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, cdefan :)
I appreciate all your support and encouraging words. So glad you enjoyed this chapter. Stay tuned... more Breedline adventures to come.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Mistydawn
What a great chapter. It has a little of everything, backstory, suspense, steamy romance. I'm so glad Jenna and Nickolas found each other. Hopefully, their love story will continue for years to come. It's very well-written, interesting, realistic start to finish. Your description is perfect. I look forward to reading more. I don't know who I feel more sorry for Jenna for being thrown into this life or poor Carrie who's life seems to be in constant turmoil, tragic state.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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What a great chapter. It has a little of everything, backstory, suspense, steamy romance. I'm so glad Jenna and Nickolas found each other. Hopefully, their love story will continue for years to come. It's very well-written, interesting, realistic start to finish. Your description is perfect. I look forward to reading more. I don't know who I feel more sorry for Jenna for being thrown into this life or poor Carrie who's life seems to be in constant turmoil, tragic state.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Mistydawn :)
I'm thrilled to hear you liked this chapter. I was hoping the love scene wouldn't offend anyone. I try to keep it tasteful.
Thanks for your support and encouraging words my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)
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It was very tasteful. You let us know what's going on without going into to many specifics. A very good thing for this group. They're not shy about letting you know how you feel. I had to do some heavy editing on one of my chapters. They didn't like the idea of Granny killing a cop.
Stay safe, dear friend.
Comment from fm wright
Loved how you described the scene. Enough to tantalize while still leaving enough for individual imagination. Also, great pics. As always wait in anticipation til your next posting.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Loved how you described the scene. Enough to tantalize while still leaving enough for individual imagination. Also, great pics. As always wait in anticipation til your next posting.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Faye :)
So happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter. I was hoping the love scene wouldn't offend anyone. I try to keep it as tasteful as I can. I do love romance.
Thanks again for your support and all the awesome reviews!
Hugs,
Shana )
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
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You're welcome. My best to you
Hugs,
Faye
Comment from ngage
Exciting chapter Ms Shana. Love the artwork mix too.
Now your new character intrigues me. How did Carrie survive but her parents did not. A mystery indeed. Wondering how this will play out.
The ending was a great example of loving and tender romance. Very tasteful.
Nate
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Exciting chapter Ms Shana. Love the artwork mix too.
Now your new character intrigues me. How did Carrie survive but her parents did not. A mystery indeed. Wondering how this will play out.
The ending was a great example of loving and tender romance. Very tasteful.
Nate
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Nate :)
So glad you found the chapter exciting. There is a lot going on and hopefully more chapters will keep you entertained.
Thanks again my friend!
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
So Jena is losing sleep because she terrified Carrie, but there's no need to. But the thing she encountered was worse than she was according to her report of this startling thing she had encountered, it was hungrier, more malevolent, but the person it inhabited was very sad. Well done, blessings, Roy
Suggestion: Now his life had (took) taken?
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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So Jena is losing sleep because she terrified Carrie, but there's no need to. But the thing she encountered was worse than she was according to her report of this startling thing she had encountered, it was hungrier, more malevolent, but the person it inhabited was very sad. Well done, blessings, Roy
Suggestion: Now his life had (took) taken?
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy! :)
So thrilled you are staying with my story. I was hoping this chapter wouldn't offend anyone since it had a bit of romance added. I try to keep it tasteful as I can.
I need to get back to writing on this story. I've been busy re-editing all my other books.
Thanks for your encouraging words and helpful advice. Glad you catch my typos. You're awesome!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Welcome Shana good luck with editing
Comment from faith bosire
Wow Sconegrove,
Hope I got the name right. Anyways your work is a masterpiece. It is so authentic and magnificent at the same time. So wrapped up... I loved it
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Wow Sconegrove,
Hope I got the name right. Anyways your work is a masterpiece. It is so authentic and magnificent at the same time. So wrapped up... I loved it
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, faith! :)
This is very kind of you. You definitely made my day! I hope to hear from you again. More Breedline adventures to come.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
I liked this story. I'm not one that's much for werewolves and the supernatural, but this was a very good story. I liked the set up in the beginning... it helped me to understand what was happening. I liked the surprise that Jena was a werewolf... I did get that... right? It was well penned. Good job. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I liked this story. I'm not one that's much for werewolves and the supernatural, but this was a very good story. I liked the set up in the beginning... it helped me to understand what was happening. I liked the surprise that Jena was a werewolf... I did get that... right? It was well penned. Good job. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you, January :)
Your feedback is so kind. I sure appreciate your encouraging words. Not everyone likes the werewolves and supernatural stories, but I have hoped to entertain here with my stories.
Yes, Jena is a werewolf. She was bitten and cursed by Nicolas's brother. The good thing is, she only attacks evil.
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Shirley McLain
Nice chapter and I didn't see any mistakes. You gave the story a needed action at the appropriate time. You did a great job, as always. Take care and stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Nice chapter and I didn't see any mistakes. You gave the story a needed action at the appropriate time. You did a great job, as always. Take care and stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much, Shirley :)
So thrilled you are enjoying the story. I love to hear your feedback. Your opinion does matter. If I can entertain others with my stories, I enjoy to continue to write.
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
