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NaPoWriMo 2020

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Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission

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Comment from BeasPeas
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I do like cuties. Where they are bagged, let's hope is where they are grown. We do not know these days the origin of anything. Changes hands so frequently. I like the presentation and cuties are irresistible. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you
    God bless you :)
Comment from Joan E.
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As you can see, I am still catching up--it's a challenge when you post a poem a day! I have a similar bag of mandarins in my refrigerator. Yes, they are "seedless," "easy to peel" l and tasty plus grown in California! An "irresistible" treat! Yum- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    You're nice. I left mine on the counter and the last few dried up in the heat. I just tossed them this morning. Thank you :)
reply by Joan E. on 01-May-2020
    Keeping them in the fridge makes all the difference! Next time... -Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the seedless cutie oranges that seems to be the new trend we are following to get the best of fruit, the sweetness and the best tastes without the pits we have to spit out.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
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Nicely penned. I like the idea of the cuties! They are delicious. The words are effortless and easy to read... I like that! I like the orange color you used to match the cuties too. Well done. With respect, -January L.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Thank you :)
Comment from Elon Vaughn
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The title caught me immediately, as I am sort of a Cuties addict. Sometimes I binge eat them, so I find your description quite fitting. I also appreciate the references being listed.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Hi! You're nice. Want to start a Cuties 12-step? I have a confession... Lolz. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for the informative little poem about those little tangerines/mandarins. I looked at your article and learned that mandarins cover all tangerines and clementines. Enjoyed your joy-filled poem about this healthy fruit!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Hi Helen! Mandarins have better skin too. Thank you :)
Comment from J.R. Preston
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What a fun little poem about a popular type of fruit. I am a big fan of cuties and this poem definitely did it justice. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Thank you
    Be careful. Stay strong and safe :)
Comment from Treischel
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I love those fruits and enjoyed your poem about them, as the ease of peeling them is their most appealing virtue beyond their sweetness. Sometimes you get a bag that is hard to peel, and then they become a mess. Enjoyed your enthusiasm about them being from California.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    Hi! Hard to peel mandarins are old. Thank you :)
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Sun: great poem about the cuties oranges. I like how easy
they are to peel and eat. They are great to take for a snack on
a walk and share with children. You went the extra mile for the
video and glitter graphics. Yeah!!! flylikeaneagle **************
stars for you ****************** stay well ****************

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
    You're nice. Thank you again :)