NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Healing"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
7 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your rendering of a quasi acrostic and your focus on healing during these difficult times. We should post your poem on our refrigerators so that we can be influenced by your "optimism" every day! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I liked your rendering of a quasi acrostic and your focus on healing during these difficult times. We should post your poem on our refrigerators so that we can be influenced by your "optimism" every day! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! That's very nice of you to say. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Treischel
A cleverly written Acrostic Poem that hangs upon the letters of the word "Healing." You brought out the inherent emotion associated. I smiled at the one for letter "A."
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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A cleverly written Acrostic Poem that hangs upon the letters of the word "Healing." You brought out the inherent emotion associated. I smiled at the one for letter "A."
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you. Happy Sunday :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about healing. The coronavirus lockdown give nature a chance to heal and we as humans get a chance to heal spiritually and that is also a good thing. Every challenge help us to grow spiritually.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about healing. The coronavirus lockdown give nature a chance to heal and we as humans get a chance to heal spiritually and that is also a good thing. Every challenge help us to grow spiritually.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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You're the best. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
What a great meditation on the word Healing using the letters of that word in each of the lines! My favorite line was "G and remember to stay gracious as I grow stronger from those grumbles."
One spelling error:
"because I search to imbed optimism" (embed)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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What a great meditation on the word Healing using the letters of that word in each of the lines! My favorite line was "G and remember to stay gracious as I grow stronger from those grumbles."
One spelling error:
"because I search to imbed optimism" (embed)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! I just double-checked. Both words have the same meaning. Either spelling could be used; imbed and embed. Good to know. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
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Oh, good to know. I have only seen embed as in embedded code in programming. Thanks.
Comment from Irish Rain
Absolutely true!!
I like the joy and happiness in
this, also the cheerful picture.
Healing is composed of all these
elements, and always so worth it.
Lovely acrostic!
Stay well,
blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Absolutely true!!
I like the joy and happiness in
this, also the cheerful picture.
Healing is composed of all these
elements, and always so worth it.
Lovely acrostic!
Stay well,
blessings...
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hi Judy! Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
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You too honey!!
Comment from LisaMay
I like the imagery you have utilised here - the triangle, the lullaby. You reveal that this well-worded poem took a long time to write. I can see that it actually took a whole lot longer than 24 hours. It has taken all your life so far to get to this point in your healing. Stay strong.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I like the imagery you have utilised here - the triangle, the lullaby. You reveal that this well-worded poem took a long time to write. I can see that it actually took a whole lot longer than 24 hours. It has taken all your life so far to get to this point in your healing. Stay strong.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hi! Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, it's true, one shouldn't get too het up about things around them, angst only brings frustration and anger, healin is always a ongoing, but to harness it's a gift, well done Alicia, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Oh yes, it's true, one shouldn't get too het up about things around them, angst only brings frustration and anger, healin is always a ongoing, but to harness it's a gift, well done Alicia, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
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You too
