Rescue
Humanity is instinctive.10 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I would if I could get in definitely go in and get the person out of there. I don't think that my conscience would be clear knowing I was right there looking at the situation and did nothing. I like the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I would if I could get in definitely go in and get the person out of there. I don't think that my conscience would be clear knowing I was right there looking at the situation and did nothing. I like the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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You are so right, Jeffrey. Conscience would dictate my actions in a situation like this, too. I am delighted you enjoyed my story and its message. Rod
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Rescue
Hello my friend
Interesting short flash fiction about the Corona virus and human sacrifice. I think in an emergency I probably would react without thinking too much, especially if you know the person. Good job ð???
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Rescue
Hello my friend
Interesting short flash fiction about the Corona virus and human sacrifice. I think in an emergency I probably would react without thinking too much, especially if you know the person. Good job ð???
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I am pleased to see you and my narrator are much alike in your thinking, Gypsy. Thank you so much for sharing RESCUE.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The description in this Hundred Word Story entry is particularly good, a picture being traced by very few words. It also has the positive point that the story twists smoothly away from fire to the current crisis.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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The description in this Hundred Word Story entry is particularly good, a picture being traced by very few words. It also has the positive point that the story twists smoothly away from fire to the current crisis.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed the descriptions and the message of RESCUE, Katherine. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Rescue, uses the required words and the proper word count and tells a vivid story of saving a life even when danger still persists in the form of the virus.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This story, Rescue, uses the required words and the proper word count and tells a vivid story of saving a life even when danger still persists in the form of the virus.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing RESCUE and your kind praise.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, the virus would be the last thing on my mind if I saw a fire in the neighbor's house. This is a thought provoking flash fiction. You wrote on a subject we should think about.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Yes, the virus would be the last thing on my mind if I saw a fire in the neighbor's house. This is a thought provoking flash fiction. You wrote on a subject we should think about.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I this is the kind of review I truly welcome, Rebecca. Thank you very much.
Comment from BeasPeas
A very good story. We never know when we'll be called upon to do something heroic. In this case to save a neighbor from a fire. Interspersed dialogue, descriptions and story line are all excellent. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A very good story. We never know when we'll be called upon to do something heroic. In this case to save a neighbor from a fire. Interspersed dialogue, descriptions and story line are all excellent. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Marilyn, for all your kind praise of RESCUE.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
Well, one would certainly hope! I think we all have to act immediately to care for and to protect our brothers and sisters in the world. My hope is that sending her into a hospital wouldn't be sending her to a worse place. Thanks! And good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Dear Mystery Author,
Well, one would certainly hope! I think we all have to act immediately to care for and to protect our brothers and sisters in the world. My hope is that sending her into a hospital wouldn't be sending her to a worse place. Thanks! And good luck!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing my story and your comments. Robyn. Yes, one hopes Molly will not be infected now, after her close escape.
Comment from royowen
It's true that we can die of anything at all, the Corona virus has become all consuming, but in our local nursing homes, the residents are pining for lack of visitors, not eating, not doing that well, we miss our grandchildren terribly, well done, blessings, good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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It's true that we can die of anything at all, the Corona virus has become all consuming, but in our local nursing homes, the residents are pining for lack of visitors, not eating, not doing that well, we miss our grandchildren terribly, well done, blessings, good luck, Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing RESCUE.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I liked this Flash Fiction. It was action packed. I like the idea of the hero with the bad heart and it's timely too. You used the Corona situation in it as well. Nicely done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I liked this Flash Fiction. It was action packed. I like the idea of the hero with the bad heart and it's timely too. You used the Corona situation in it as well. Nicely done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this marvelous review of RESCUE, January.
Comment from susand3022
Yeah, seriously... depending on where they are, you might want to have the ambulance driver just leave the O2 with you. lol Drive to your nearest healthy relative's house and move in. EEEEK!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Yeah, seriously... depending on where they are, you might want to have the ambulance driver just leave the O2 with you. lol Drive to your nearest healthy relative's house and move in. EEEEK!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing RESCUE.
