The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "I Lost it!"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from LisaMay
The more i read of your story the more sympathy I felt for you as your situation and emotions of frustration, worry, and sadness became apparent. You have captured these well in your story. I hope you are able to get back to see you Mom in Romania... as soon as situation possible.
Give the kitties some pats from me, and here's a big hug from me to you. xx
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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The more i read of your story the more sympathy I felt for you as your situation and emotions of frustration, worry, and sadness became apparent. You have captured these well in your story. I hope you are able to get back to see you Mom in Romania... as soon as situation possible.
Give the kitties some pats from me, and here's a big hug from me to you. xx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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The kittens got the pats on their tiger backs:) and I hope too that I will get to see her soon:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry story reads well. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you formatted your lines/words. The bold words were good idea. I believe it keeps readers focused on the idea of forced isolation and your reaction to it. I like how you put your thoughts into this from everything about the apartment designers to the kitties, to your boss. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Your contest entry story reads well. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you formatted your lines/words. The bold words were good idea. I believe it keeps readers focused on the idea of forced isolation and your reaction to it. I like how you put your thoughts into this from everything about the apartment designers to the kitties, to your boss. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Jan, I really appreciate your comment and good wishes:)
Comment from samandlancelot
I love your cat picture. Your emotions came out very well. I felt your frustration. It needs quite a few corrections, but I suspect that was your emotions clouding your vision.
I appreciate the invite into your world.
Let me know if you make the corrections; I'll raise your rating.
Whoever comes (came) up with this idea, must have been an introvert.
I guess for this type (these types) of guys is (it's) business as usual.
After all is (it's) my fever, so I can spend it as I like it.
Whoever was the architect of this apartment have (had) not
How (are) you supposed to go through a locked down (lock down) with this (these) living arrangements?
I liked your rant/ lost it moment toward your husband.
What I was (was I) doing last year on this day?
Well I (I'm) supposed to go and see
Let's (get his fight) fight this over!
Well, I think you have (a) fever.
Patricia
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I love your cat picture. Your emotions came out very well. I felt your frustration. It needs quite a few corrections, but I suspect that was your emotions clouding your vision.
I appreciate the invite into your world.
Let me know if you make the corrections; I'll raise your rating.
Whoever comes (came) up with this idea, must have been an introvert.
I guess for this type (these types) of guys is (it's) business as usual.
After all is (it's) my fever, so I can spend it as I like it.
Whoever was the architect of this apartment have (had) not
How (are) you supposed to go through a locked down (lock down) with this (these) living arrangements?
I liked your rant/ lost it moment toward your husband.
What I was (was I) doing last year on this day?
Well I (I'm) supposed to go and see
Let's (get his fight) fight this over!
Well, I think you have (a) fever.
Patricia
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hi Patricia, so sorry for my delay. I am very grateful for your helpful comments and grammar corrections:) One big thank you, Coronella free, from the bottom of my heart:)
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I raised your rating to five stars
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very funny free flowing monologue. I love the rapid fire about "losing it" and being sick of your family. I get you! I can see this rant coming out of someones mouth so easily these days... you are not alone. I like your story. Well done. -January L.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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This is a very funny free flowing monologue. I love the rapid fire about "losing it" and being sick of your family. I get you! I can see this rant coming out of someones mouth so easily these days... you are not alone. I like your story. Well done. -January L.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much ,January and I hope your family is more supporting that my yapping one:)
