Inhaling Love
A 20 Syllable Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty syllable poem about love that become part of us where we can inhale the essence of your love with every breath we exhale and inhale.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem about love that become part of us where we can inhale the essence of your love with every breath we exhale and inhale.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is true love as we think deeply about those we care about and their essence is always with us and we ride and praise their presence, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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This is true love as we think deeply about those we care about and their essence is always with us and we ride and praise their presence, much enjoyed, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, good one, K. Smart of you to organize your entry on two lines of ten syllables each. That way my counting ability isn't challenged. lol
I love the sensuous joy of your entry into this contest and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Ha, good one, K. Smart of you to organize your entry on two lines of ten syllables each. That way my counting ability isn't challenged. lol
I love the sensuous joy of your entry into this contest and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much, actually I just read your wonderful presentation, and was thinking of your format, OH well I cannot change now, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
A sweet love poem in just twenty syllables. I like how you used the word "inhale" in the first line and ended with "exhale" showing how the breath of life is so tied with love of the couple.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A sweet love poem in just twenty syllables. I like how you used the word "inhale" in the first line and ended with "exhale" showing how the breath of life is so tied with love of the couple.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you, yes the breath of life is very much connected to love, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Puzzle
Omg this is beautiful. I like how you worked the inhale/exhale aspect into love. Because really love is with every breath you take right? This is written well. I don't see any errors!
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Omg this is beautiful. I like how you worked the inhale/exhale aspect into love. Because really love is with every breath you take right? This is written well. I don't see any errors!
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review and coments, much appreciated****kahpot
