Inhaling Love
A 20 Syllable Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is such a romantic offering for the contest (not that I would expect anything less from you, sir!)... love the fact that they breathe as one! ;) :) Thanx so much for that vision this morning and best of luck in the contest!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Oh, this is such a romantic offering for the contest (not that I would expect anything less from you, sir!)... love the fact that they breathe as one! ;) :) Thanx so much for that vision this morning and best of luck in the contest!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you my friend, yes those were the days, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from smileycloud
such a very strong and powerful expression of intensity
when your love is every breath you take then there resides the meeting of the souls
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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such a very strong and powerful expression of intensity
when your love is every breath you take then there resides the meeting of the souls
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from susand3022
Hi Kahopt... you're leaving me breathless... awaiting that time when I can have my long-awaited kiss... my boyfriend got stuck in Maine at his brother's house for the pandemic. He came down to take care of his sister for a bit... so I got to see him, across the yard, so he could pick up some clothes and sporting equipment. lol ... poor guy. Thank heaven he keeps some clothes in his truck in case he ends up working somewhere for a couple of days. I'm still awaiting my kiss... though I should get my deck power washed before he leaves! Yes! :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hi Kahopt... you're leaving me breathless... awaiting that time when I can have my long-awaited kiss... my boyfriend got stuck in Maine at his brother's house for the pandemic. He came down to take care of his sister for a bit... so I got to see him, across the yard, so he could pick up some clothes and sporting equipment. lol ... poor guy. Thank heaven he keeps some clothes in his truck in case he ends up working somewhere for a couple of days. I'm still awaiting my kiss... though I should get my deck power washed before he leaves! Yes! :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you, I am waiting to hug my Mom, travel prevents this for now, I feel for you seeing but no kissing-so sad, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Inhaling Love
by kahpot
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
20 Syllable Poem contest. Good syllable count. I love the presentation. The words flow well. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Inhaling Love
by kahpot
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
20 Syllable Poem contest. Good syllable count. I love the presentation. The words flow well. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you my friend, it was fun to try this one, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh I wish I had a six for this amazing piece. Using the opposite wording was a great idea because it made me do a double take. Very nicely done for the contest
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Oh I wish I had a six for this amazing piece. Using the opposite wording was a great idea because it made me do a double take. Very nicely done for the contest
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much Barb, your comments are very encouraging, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
you manage the challenge of the 20 syllable length admirably in your poem, managing to tell a story even using such a compact format. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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you manage the challenge of the 20 syllable length admirably in your poem, managing to tell a story even using such a compact format. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
A special connection is rare these days - and this poem highlights the delight of two soul mates bound by their love. The imagery is heartwarming and the words well chosen. A pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A special connection is rare these days - and this poem highlights the delight of two soul mates bound by their love. The imagery is heartwarming and the words well chosen. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this dramatically
romantic and vividly descriptive piece. You have a pleasant blendof literal and figurative language.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this dramatically
romantic and vividly descriptive piece. You have a pleasant blendof literal and figurative language.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for these wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker
Kahpot, such a wonderful poem. Your words sound as soft as the kiss the two share. Love is intertwining, and you express that beautifully in 20 syllables. Excellent poem and a beautiful photo. Best wishes, Kahpot. Stay well.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Kahpot, such a wonderful poem. Your words sound as soft as the kiss the two share. Love is intertwining, and you express that beautifully in 20 syllables. Excellent poem and a beautiful photo. Best wishes, Kahpot. Stay well.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you Cindy for your wonderful comments and wishes, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there. A very beautiful and well constructed short poem. A very deep sense of true love captured. A very well written entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hi there. A very beautiful and well constructed short poem. A very deep sense of true love captured. A very well written entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
