Sweetest Melody
A Senryu entry6 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
A Beautifully written and elegant Senryu poeticly stated offering containing a great accompanying photo for this contest. Best of Luck and may God Blessings be with you.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A Beautifully written and elegant Senryu poeticly stated offering containing a great accompanying photo for this contest. Best of Luck and may God Blessings be with you.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very romantic poetry, very suitable to present to someone you love. This could even be an elegant greeting card for a male or female spouse, sweetheart or lover, and it would be so much to the point, expressing love without being overly sentimental, just right. The image matches the well written verses perfectly!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Very romantic poetry, very suitable to present to someone you love. This could even be an elegant greeting card for a male or female spouse, sweetheart or lover, and it would be so much to the point, expressing love without being overly sentimental, just right. The image matches the well written verses perfectly!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
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Yes, I did :-)
Comment from River X
I am a fan of these short poems. You didn't need 5 stanzas to compare the music in your heart to the melody in your soul that love brings. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I am a fan of these short poems. You didn't need 5 stanzas to compare the music in your heart to the melody in your soul that love brings. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from samandlancelot
Oh, I like this. It takes two to make a song: one brings the lyrics and one brings the music. Together, the two become one. Great love story.
Excellent entry for the senryu contest.
Patricia
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Oh, I like this. It takes two to make a song: one brings the lyrics and one brings the music. Together, the two become one. Great love story.
Excellent entry for the senryu contest.
Patricia
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights~
Comment from Rintins
When I open your writing prompt I didn't know what to expect.
I got a real surprise, this is one great piece of work.
I really love the picture you inputed with the red rose.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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When I open your writing prompt I didn't know what to expect.
I got a real surprise, this is one great piece of work.
I really love the picture you inputed with the red rose.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights~
Comment from January L'Angelle
This poem really hits home for me. My husband is a musician and although this poem is short, it says a lot. It's like a marriage between two people: lyrics and music, creating the melody of love. I really enjoyed this! Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This poem really hits home for me. My husband is a musician and although this poem is short, it says a lot. It's like a marriage between two people: lyrics and music, creating the melody of love. I really enjoyed this! Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights~
