Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

That is one thing I realized after my sons dies, time does continue to move on no matter whether we want it to stop so we can breathe or not. Very well written

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thanks for sharing that Barbara.
There are a few on here by the way that have lost sons.
One that lost a teenage daughter who was decapitated in a car accident she was only 14.
Ricky

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem moves from conception to maturity using time as the most important aspect. The way we spend our time is what we have to think about. LIfe is a gift and we have to cherish and share it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Why thanks Joan always a pleasure to hear from you!
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Apr-2020

No problem, Ricky.
Joan

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I really like this part and I think it can evolve in a very strong narrative aka story :"Time is a Window of Events within a Portal of Being.
"All watching and forever seeing"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next writing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020

Thanks for reviewing again Iza.
I have little problems with coming up with the magic never had writer's block.
I guess when you're gifted that's part of the deal?
Ricky