Comment from Lorraine Rizzuto

Excellent

really like this poem and how delightful that it takes place in a bookstore,
paints a beautiful visualization by the author and takes us to another place in our dreams

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020

Thank you for this very nice review...I always appreciate it. :)

Comment from RodG

Good

I like how this all began in a small bookstore. Easy to visualize the setting with both of you holding books yet I bought just as a rain storm begins. . Please review the prompt as the maximum length is 16 lines.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020

Thank you..I went back and reviewed the rules and you were right. Thank you foe for letting me know.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I like this story in a poem that is written with smooth rhyme. Sounds like it could've been a true story. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Bill

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020

Thank you for this wonderful review. It really lifted my spirits. :)