Revelation of Dawn
Morning by morning, the promise renews...45 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
A shining crowned "Corona" gem among these days' broadcast anxious news. What a calm dawn rebirth as the minded Sun Beauty rises greeting the new coming day. The thrice 8/4/4/4 syllables counting and stanzaic setting of the Minute Poem structure has been amazingly fixed within its rhymed scheme and flow throughout its natural waiting narrative story lined content! Chapeau Poetess!
It's a pity that I have no six stars left!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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A shining crowned "Corona" gem among these days' broadcast anxious news. What a calm dawn rebirth as the minded Sun Beauty rises greeting the new coming day. The thrice 8/4/4/4 syllables counting and stanzaic setting of the Minute Poem structure has been amazingly fixed within its rhymed scheme and flow throughout its natural waiting narrative story lined content! Chapeau Poetess!
It's a pity that I have no six stars left!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Wow, Tony!! ;) Thanx so much for this awesome review, sir -- so good to hear from you! ;) Please forgive the delay... I'm in the home stretch of the 'online school year' - ugh!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Crap! How'd I miss this beauty? Love it. It must've been blind, or my eyesight is as bad as suspected. A gorgeous offering and so healing. I see the voters thought so, too. Congratulations! A six for you, my lady. :)
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Crap! How'd I miss this beauty? Love it. It must've been blind, or my eyesight is as bad as suspected. A gorgeous offering and so healing. I see the voters thought so, too. Congratulations! A six for you, my lady. :)
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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LOL!! ;) Thanx so much for those lovely stars, my lady -- and, yeah, it was a contest entry --- it really was one of those things that just flowed out after a long day (love shorties for the busy folks!) .... :) :) I am so glad it made you smile... your stars made me smile!! :) :) Enjoy the evening and the rest of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Dawn is the beginning of a new day full of promises, tasks, problems, and solutions that must be dealt with. In the cool of the morning these things are not thought of, but we are refreshed and ready to see what this new day holds. Well written!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Dawn is the beginning of a new day full of promises, tasks, problems, and solutions that must be dealt with. In the cool of the morning these things are not thought of, but we are refreshed and ready to see what this new day holds. Well written!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review! May you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
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Thank you kindly!
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
This poem is nicely done and with a beautiful picture besides, while the message that is conveyed is timeless and is written wonderfully. When read speedily, with great emotion accenting the appropriate crescendos, it reads well aloud, flowing with great excitement to its climax. giovanni
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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This poem is nicely done and with a beautiful picture besides, while the message that is conveyed is timeless and is written wonderfully. When read speedily, with great emotion accenting the appropriate crescendos, it reads well aloud, flowing with great excitement to its climax. giovanni
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review!! May you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
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y/w giovanni
Comment from Raul1
You had me there with endless days. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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You had me there with endless days. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really beautiful. The dawning of a new day and the beginning of hope once more. Yesterday is gone and we may not be able to change the past. Today, this moment is what we have now to make a difference. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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This is really beautiful. The dawning of a new day and the beginning of hope once more. Yesterday is gone and we may not be able to change the past. Today, this moment is what we have now to make a difference. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed, Jeffrey - thank you for your review! May you enjoy a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This poem is like an Ode to Sunrise. How sweet to greet the Sun in such a gentle manner with such eloquent words and such a wondrous piece of art. A superb presentation. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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This poem is like an Ode to Sunrise. How sweet to greet the Sun in such a gentle manner with such eloquent words and such a wondrous piece of art. A superb presentation. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad you enjoyed, Raffaelina - thank you for your review! May you enjoy a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
The poem is lovely. I like the content and the rhyme scheme is cool. It's a beautiful work. The image itself is not bad at all. It's goes with the content. Thanks for sharing. Good job
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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The poem is lovely. I like the content and the rhyme scheme is cool. It's a beautiful work. The image itself is not bad at all. It's goes with the content. Thanks for sharing. Good job
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Opeyemi, and may you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
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Amen thanks a lot
Comment from smileycloud
such beautiful imagery and personalisation of the dawn itself
the Minute Poem is in perfect from and good luck in the contest with this brilliant work
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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such beautiful imagery and personalisation of the dawn itself
the Minute Poem is in perfect from and good luck in the contest with this brilliant work
have a smiley day
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Smiley, and may you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
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and a huge big "ditto" 2 U 2
Comment from Rmocruz
Effectively in compliance with the minute poem format.
Solid rhyming presents free flowing words creating colorful imagery.
I enjoyed reading this promising writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Effectively in compliance with the minute poem format.
Solid rhyming presents free flowing words creating colorful imagery.
I enjoyed reading this promising writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Rich, and may you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
