Wild Neighbours
100 word dash3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Wild Neighbors, meets the word count and finds places the readers in a wide open space to sit out the duration. Nice to welcome new critters you haven't got to wash off your hands.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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This one-hundred-word story, Wild Neighbors, meets the word count and finds places the readers in a wide open space to sit out the duration. Nice to welcome new critters you haven't got to wash off your hands.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and good story, too.
-You tell it very well.
-Excellent detail and progression
of events.
-You give us the scene and setting,
and include the current situation
in a subtle manner that isn't
preaching about it.
-I like Jack because he looks
at his balance sheet, and doesn't
get too stressed about it, as
well as the news of the cases.
-The best part is the ending
when he smiles at his new neighbors.
-This is an excellent story that I
enjoyed reading.
-I look forward to knowing
who you are; good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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-Nice image and good story, too.
-You tell it very well.
-Excellent detail and progression
of events.
-You give us the scene and setting,
and include the current situation
in a subtle manner that isn't
preaching about it.
-I like Jack because he looks
at his balance sheet, and doesn't
get too stressed about it, as
well as the news of the cases.
-The best part is the ending
when he smiles at his new neighbors.
-This is an excellent story that I
enjoyed reading.
-I look forward to knowing
who you are; good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A comprehensive review with fine details and analysis- valuable insight. zanya
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed our contest entry. I would like thee new neighbors, too. This is a great entry. With the ongoing dilemma of the virus and the news blaring it and the lockdown, something in nature would be a welcome sight like this deer. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed our contest entry. I would like thee new neighbors, too. This is a great entry. With the ongoing dilemma of the virus and the news blaring it and the lockdown, something in nature would be a welcome sight like this deer. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Such interesting changes occurring alongside the trauma zanya
