A Pebble
Changed my life65 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I am so sorry to learn that your son-in-law had coronavirus and hope he has completely recovered. Thank you for sharing this quasi-hallucination. I am glad it helped you to cope with the unthinkable. Take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I am so sorry to learn that your son-in-law had coronavirus and hope he has completely recovered. Thank you for sharing this quasi-hallucination. I am glad it helped you to cope with the unthinkable. Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you Joan for your encouraging review. My son-in-law is full recovered and doing very well - thank you.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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What a relief! I hope he never has to endure such a challenge again. Be safe and well- Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about the little pebbles. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I am so happy to hear your son in law is recovering. You are all in my prayers. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This is a very well written poem about the little pebbles. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I am so happy to hear your son in law is recovering. You are all in my prayers. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Teri for your thoughtful review.
My son-on-law has made a full recovery. Thank you for your prayers.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
Comment from Minglement
A very creative and lyrical poem painting a vivid picture with your beautiful phrases of how insidious this virus is. I hope your son-in-law recovers fully and quickly. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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A very creative and lyrical poem painting a vivid picture with your beautiful phrases of how insidious this virus is. I hope your son-in-law recovers fully and quickly. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for asking.
Blessings
Janet
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You are so welcome,Praise the Lord for that recovery! So glad :)
Comment from J.R. Preston
Thank you for sharing that creative and touching poem. The imagery was excellent and it's message is all to real! I hope that you son-in-law is having a quick recovery!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing that creative and touching poem. The imagery was excellent and it's message is all to real! I hope that you son-in-law is having a quick recovery!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for asking.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Your meter is great for blank verse. I guess the pebbles are symbolic of more than one thing, but the graphic helps explain it. Thanks for the author notes. I thought this line helped explain the anxiety of what happens when someone in the family is gravely ill: From there I watched into the endless night
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Your meter is great for blank verse. I guess the pebbles are symbolic of more than one thing, but the graphic helps explain it. Thanks for the author notes. I thought this line helped explain the anxiety of what happens when someone in the family is gravely ill: From there I watched into the endless night
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A nicely written poem about what concerns us all. I hope your son-in-law has a speedy recovery. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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A nicely written poem about what concerns us all. I hope your son-in-law has a speedy recovery. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you Lance for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for asking.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Your strong sense of writing is just very marvelous and brilliant. My heart goes to your son i-nlaw. He will fully recuperate. My prayers are with him and your family. For the while, please, be safe. This season will surely come to pass!
My very best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Your strong sense of writing is just very marvelous and brilliant. My heart goes to your son i-nlaw. He will fully recuperate. My prayers are with him and your family. For the while, please, be safe. This season will surely come to pass!
My very best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for asking.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from karenina
Sorry about your son in law contracting Covid-19. Happy to hear he is recovering. It is on everyone's mind and yet I see couples on the news strolling the beaches and protesters in Michigan up in one another's space and faces demanding the state be open and I fear the ravages of a second surge as more and more grow desperate for money, desperate to get outside and mingle... I can only watch half hour of news these days...the anxiety and fear are overwhelming as we watch even our first responders struggle to get proper PPE. God Bless your son and your family. Be Safe!--Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Sorry about your son in law contracting Covid-19. Happy to hear he is recovering. It is on everyone's mind and yet I see couples on the news strolling the beaches and protesters in Michigan up in one another's space and faces demanding the state be open and I fear the ravages of a second surge as more and more grow desperate for money, desperate to get outside and mingle... I can only watch half hour of news these days...the anxiety and fear are overwhelming as we watch even our first responders struggle to get proper PPE. God Bless your son and your family. Be Safe!--Karenina
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you karenina for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for your concern.
Like you, we can only watch the news for short periods of time.
Blessings
Janet
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So happy to hear h has come through it! Thanks for telling me!--Karenina
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Stay Safe and enjoy your family! We are only promised today!--Karenina
Comment from clsandau
A beautifully crafted poem describing events going on today. Hope your son-in-law recovers fully from this dreadful virus. You have described it so well and using pebbles as you have is perfect! Wonderful picture you found to go along with it. Let's hope they come up with answers soon.
Hope that you are staying safe too. Blessings, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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A beautifully crafted poem describing events going on today. Hope your son-in-law recovers fully from this dreadful virus. You have described it so well and using pebbles as you have is perfect! Wonderful picture you found to go along with it. Let's hope they come up with answers soon.
Hope that you are staying safe too. Blessings, Carol
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you Carol for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for your concern.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a poignant story as we innocently spread this deadly virus among ourselves without realising it and all around are dying. I hope all is well with your son in law, a fine and terrifying write front the heart, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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This is such a poignant story as we innocently spread this deadly virus among ourselves without realising it and all around are dying. I hope all is well with your son in law, a fine and terrifying write front the heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you Dolly for your thoughtful review.
My son-in-law seems to have made a full recovery. Thanks for your cercern..
Blessings
Janet
