Guilty
15 words can say a lot. Hope You Enjoy!10 total reviews
Comment from Anya Trofimova
Indeed 15 words can say a lot! You communicate a plethora of feelings in this piece. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this write!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Indeed 15 words can say a lot! You communicate a plethora of feelings in this piece. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this write!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the five star review. I like to try to stay positive - Jerry
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So important nowadays! Stay safe and happy writing. Look forward to reading more of your work soon.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. It's a relaxing and enjoyable way to spend time indoors and relieve stress. This is really good and very well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I love the message conveyed in this. It's a relaxing and enjoyable way to spend time indoors and relieve stress. This is really good and very well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the 5 star review and very nice comments.
Comment from joycetreasures
This is a lovely love poem. Only 15 words, but very sweet and romantic. I love your title, "Guilty." Yes, I like that you like being guilty (House Arrest) of loving someone, especially you are glad to be home to make love to that person. Good job. No errors I saw. I did enjoy this poem. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely love poem. Only 15 words, but very sweet and romantic. I love your title, "Guilty." Yes, I like that you like being guilty (House Arrest) of loving someone, especially you are glad to be home to make love to that person. Good job. No errors I saw. I did enjoy this poem. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the 5 stars and your wonderful comments.
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you are welcome.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
House arrest is a good time to renew our first feelings of togetherness. In a few months there will be a rash of babies to prove the point. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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House arrest is a good time to renew our first feelings of togetherness. In a few months there will be a rash of babies to prove the point. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the 5 stars and great comments. Guess we should all by stock in a baby food company. LOL
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Your good sense of humor will get you through trials and tribulations!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I expect this period will result in a rising birth rate in just a few months as everyone is locked inside with nothing else to do that make babies, and we shall probably need the numbers too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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I expect this period will result in a rising birth rate in just a few months as everyone is locked inside with nothing else to do that make babies, and we shall probably need the numbers too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the 5 stars. I believe it was Ogden Nash who said, "Oh what delightful habits we share with the rabbits" LOL
Comment from BeasPeas
Very good. What else is there to do but housework and being on FanStory? Just kidding. Sounds like a fun way to spend quarantine. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Very good. What else is there to do but housework and being on FanStory? Just kidding. Sounds like a fun way to spend quarantine. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the 5 stars. I believe it was Ogden Nash who said, "Oh what delightful habits we share with the rabbits" LOL
Comment from Cindy Warren
That sounds like a good way to spend time if you have to stay home. How fortunate that these two get to stay home together. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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That sounds like a good way to spend time if you have to stay home. How fortunate that these two get to stay home together. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the 5 stars and yes it does.
Comment from LisaMay
You are so lucky to have a loving companion to be shut away with! I am really envious. I like how your poem is such a topical response to our current situation... and it rhymes.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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You are so lucky to have a loving companion to be shut away with! I am really envious. I like how your poem is such a topical response to our current situation... and it rhymes.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the 5 stars. It just seemed appropriate.
Comment from Kathleen S.
Your title and poem go hand in hand. Very well written and interesting to read. You have captured the subject well and are here by sentenced further to house consignment. :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Your title and poem go hand in hand. Very well written and interesting to read. You have captured the subject well and are here by sentenced further to house consignment. :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Wow - thanks for the 5 stars and the sentence. It is a tough punishment but I will try - LOL
Comment from royowen
Yes, someone was saying only the other day, they were wondering if the world's population will change markedly or not, my guess it just might. A beautifully written entry in this contest, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Yes, someone was saying only the other day, they were wondering if the world's population will change markedly or not, my guess it just might. A beautifully written entry in this contest, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the five stars and the kind words. Personally, I have a hunch more people are thinking about it then doing it. Fear an be a terrible demotivator. Hope you stay well
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That?s true
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Good job
