Love Notes
Love Poem 15 words3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem implies that we will need notes to remind us why we chose that person in the first place. Keeping up the romance is a lifetime job, but it can be fun. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
Your poem implies that we will need notes to remind us why we chose that person in the first place. Keeping up the romance is a lifetime job, but it can be fun. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Yes - it's difficult to teach us lessons especially about love !! thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is a very accurate comment on how, in the excitement of the moments of being in love, we forget to 'take notes' and we are perhaps doomed to not learn from the teaching.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
Your poem is a very accurate comment on how, in the excitement of the moments of being in love, we forget to 'take notes' and we are perhaps doomed to not learn from the teaching.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
You said a mouthful in just fifteen little words. Well done. A major secrete to success in many fields is to learn to listen and learn and or act based on what you heard and not want you want. - Jerry
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
You said a mouthful in just fifteen little words. Well done. A major secrete to success in many fields is to learn to listen and learn and or act based on what you heard and not want you want. - Jerry
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya