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The Contest

Humorous 50 Word Story

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This fifty-word humorous story, The Contest, has the required word count and seems to imply that we c@n make a contest out of just about anything here. Now I wonder if patty cake is still something I could learn.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from lyenochka
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Well, at least she won SOMETHING even if it's just the instructions as to how to play "patty cake." I like how you built some suspense and anticipation about whether Audrey won or not.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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I suppose every girl has played Patty Cake. Good luck in the contest.

Hurry and delete your author's note or you will be disqualified! Add it again when the contest is over. Read the fine print. I learned my lesson...

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thanks! I did. I'm glad you enjoyed my story! :)
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 14-Apr-2020
    Glad to help.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well, she was probably excited to receive mail and the prize even though it didn't seem like much, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your fun little contest entry. The picture is perfect. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!