Peaceful Days Ahead
My day with the Lord47 total reviews
Comment from Puzzle
This is a beautiful piece!!!! I loved it. I really like the positivity of this piece. I like how you should always look to Gods grace, especially in times like this! Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful piece!!!! I loved it. I really like the positivity of this piece. I like how you should always look to Gods grace, especially in times like this! Great job!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Puzzle,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
A very calming and peaceful poem written with ending rhymes, reads well and uses great imagery to convey the attributes of the Word speaking. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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A very calming and peaceful poem written with ending rhymes, reads well and uses great imagery to convey the attributes of the Word speaking. Buona Fortuna in the contest. giovanni
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week.
Blessings...Portia
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Portia, as long as we know our worth...
all the love God holds for us...and truly believe
He is here for us...we will walk in peace...
keep Him in our hearts...I love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture...very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Hi Portia, as long as we know our worth...
all the love God holds for us...and truly believe
He is here for us...we will walk in peace...
keep Him in our hearts...I love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture...very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Hello Dear Linda.
I pray all in wee with you my friend... Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great week and stay safe.
Love you and a Big Hug....
Portia
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your so welcome Portia....and you have a great weekend as well...and stay safe...love you...and biggest hugs...Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Portia,
What a heart-touching piece of poetry this is!
Impressive phraseology.
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
Last two lines of the 1st Stanza, and also of the last Stanza are particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello Portia,
What a heart-touching piece of poetry this is!
Impressive phraseology.
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
Last two lines of the 1st Stanza, and also of the last Stanza are particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello RP,
Thank so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments, as always your support and kindness are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...Portia
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Portia, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yes indeed, we really do need to pay close attention to all the wonderful God given pleasures in nature. You did a good job with this poem, the meter was spot on and I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Yes indeed, we really do need to pay close attention to all the wonderful God given pleasures in nature. You did a good job with this poem, the meter was spot on and I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Lou,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe...
Lots of love...
Portia
Comment from Rachel Joyce
this poem is an amazing reminder of God's beauty. it is well written and certainly deserves a six star rating! it rhymes well and has a wonderful message. good luck in the contest and God bless!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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this poem is an amazing reminder of God's beauty. it is well written and certainly deserves a six star rating! it rhymes well and has a wonderful message. good luck in the contest and God bless!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Rachel,
Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, six star rating, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from zanya
A veritable meditation here in these stanzas contemplating the beauty of Nature in all its glory enhanced by the presence of God'God's glory gave light from above'
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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A veritable meditation here in these stanzas contemplating the beauty of Nature in all its glory enhanced by the presence of God'God's glory gave light from above'
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Zanya,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Ulla
Hi, I'm so glad that you have your religion and deep belief to see you through life and the daily tasks and challenges that life throws at us. Your poem is very well written. Warm regards, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Hi, I'm so glad that you have your religion and deep belief to see you through life and the daily tasks and challenges that life throws at us. Your poem is very well written. Warm regards, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Ulla,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely rhyming poem, glorifying God and the gifts He has bestowed upon us. There is some lovely imagery in your words, that brings it to life, and puts us with you seeing all those glorious sights. Well done, my friend and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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That was a lovely rhyming poem, glorifying God and the gifts He has bestowed upon us. There is some lovely imagery in your words, that brings it to life, and puts us with you seeing all those glorious sights. Well done, my friend and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Sandra,
Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from estory
The regular rhyme and rhythm of the meter was like a heartbeat in this poem, calming and soothing. And you had wonderful natural images of flowers blooming, bees going about their chores, clouds parting, sunlight warming your face, all as symbols of God's love for us. It was a nice upbeat poem in these darkened times. We can't forget that God loves us, and if we hold to that, we will be delivered and better times will come. estory
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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The regular rhyme and rhythm of the meter was like a heartbeat in this poem, calming and soothing. And you had wonderful natural images of flowers blooming, bees going about their chores, clouds parting, sunlight warming your face, all as symbols of God's love for us. It was a nice upbeat poem in these darkened times. We can't forget that God loves us, and if we hold to that, we will be delivered and better times will come. estory
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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estory,
Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
