Love's Eternity
A 5-7-5 Poem11 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful poem written in 5-7-5 form on the subject of romance. Much is conveyed in this short poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful poem written in 5-7-5 form on the subject of romance. Much is conveyed in this short poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated
Comment from Cindy Decker
I love this poem, Kahpot. These short poems require just the right words and you've chosen two especially powerful ones--eternity, honesty, empathy when referring to love. To me, honesty is the most important for a solid foundation of love. Excellent 5-7-5 poem! Good luck. Have a wonderful week.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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I love this poem, Kahpot. These short poems require just the right words and you've chosen two especially powerful ones--eternity, honesty, empathy when referring to love. To me, honesty is the most important for a solid foundation of love. Excellent 5-7-5 poem! Good luck. Have a wonderful week.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank u for your excellent review and comments, as always very much appreciated
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
If people can be forever honest and have empathy, love has a better chance of surviving the trials and tribulations of married life.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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If people can be forever honest and have empathy, love has a better chance of surviving the trials and tribulations of married life.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
So true. What a great combination--honesty and empathy. Best of luck in the contest with this very nice 5-7-5. Illustrated and displayed well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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So true. What a great combination--honesty and empathy. Best of luck in the contest with this very nice 5-7-5. Illustrated and displayed well. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much
Comment from RShipp
Your second line of your 5-7-5 romance poem spoke volumes of truth ... "honesty and empathy" .
I enjoyed your poem.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Your second line of your 5-7-5 romance poem spoke volumes of truth ... "honesty and empathy" .
I enjoyed your poem.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank very much, so encouraging
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nice. I like the word choices in your poem. I know that can be tough with so little syllables to work with. The second line is a powerful one for me - so true. Great job!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Very nice. I like the word choices in your poem. I know that can be tough with so little syllables to work with. The second line is a powerful one for me - so true. Great job!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Honesty and empathy are so evident that one can feel and perceive the grace, volume and truth of love shown, given or expressed; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Honesty and empathy are so evident that one can feel and perceive the grace, volume and truth of love shown, given or expressed; well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this encouraging review
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Is love equal to romanticism? Sometimes yes, sometimes no, everything depends on the circumstances:"love's eternity ~
honesty and empathy
forever given
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Is love equal to romanticism? Sometimes yes, sometimes no, everything depends on the circumstances:"love's eternity ~
honesty and empathy
forever given
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much-is romance equal to love ? very good questions
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A great 5/7/5 romance poem entry. I like the presentation too. Good syllable count. The lines connect grammatically giving the poem good flow. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
A great 5/7/5 romance poem entry. I like the presentation too. Good syllable count. The lines connect grammatically giving the poem good flow. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what keeps love and romance alive, the understanding between two people and a love that has empathy for the relationship and others, as this is the only love that survived, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This is what keeps love and romance alive, the understanding between two people and a love that has empathy for the relationship and others, as this is the only love that survived, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review
