Love and Phoenix Tears
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Quidditch"A Harry Potter fanfiction!
3 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
No! No time jumps! Text me...Call me!!! Whatever!!! (401-363-1523) I mean it's not like I've got anywhere to go... lol Talk to me about what you want to do... feel free to bounce ideas around and I'll bounce back! There is no writers block... your brain is just trying to figure out the next step... lol :)
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No! No time jumps! Text me...Call me!!! Whatever!!! (401-363-1523) I mean it's not like I've got anywhere to go... lol Talk to me about what you want to do... feel free to bounce ideas around and I'll bounce back! There is no writers block... your brain is just trying to figure out the next step... lol :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great chapter. It was very entertaining. I like the conflict where Lily and James having to leave the dormitory. I also like the action scene where James chased after Regulus. I love the whole concept of your story.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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I think that you wrote a great chapter. It was very entertaining. I like the conflict where Lily and James having to leave the dormitory. I also like the action scene where James chased after Regulus. I love the whole concept of your story.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! =D
Comment from keimosobie
I like your style of writing. I like the fact that you took the time to describe the temperature and paid attention to how they looked flying close to one another. The story I'm not familiar with but the style I like. I just watched a Harry Potter movie yesterday lol. Is this just another class at Hogwarts. Why not the first one was interesting.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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I like your style of writing. I like the fact that you took the time to describe the temperature and paid attention to how they looked flying close to one another. The story I'm not familiar with but the style I like. I just watched a Harry Potter movie yesterday lol. Is this just another class at Hogwarts. Why not the first one was interesting.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts! It's funny timing right after you watch a Harry Potter movie yesterday! This story is about his parents. Thanks again for your feedback!
