Dealing With Charles
80 Word contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is hysterically funny. Congratulations on winning the contest with this super little story--not that I wanted anything bad to happen to Charles, mind you. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This is hysterically funny. Congratulations on winning the contest with this super little story--not that I wanted anything bad to happen to Charles, mind you. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Marilyn. I really appreciate the gracious stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Ron
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You're welcome. Gave me my daily chuckle.
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I'm glad. Have a great day, Marilyn.
Comment from pome lover
funny, clever and original.
Successful combination!
congratulations on our win.
Sadistic humor at its best. And we need humor these days. good job.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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funny, clever and original.
Successful combination!
congratulations on our win.
Sadistic humor at its best. And we need humor these days. good job.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Pone Lover. I appreciate the generous stars and congratulations. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love this and congrats on winning the contest. You did a marvelous job on poor Charles. I can see why you won the contest. Take care and stay healthy. Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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I love this and congrats on winning the contest. You did a marvelous job on poor Charles. I can see why you won the contest. Take care and stay healthy. Shirley
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Shirley. I'm glad you liked my little story. I really appreciate the gracious rating and congrats. I hope you have a wonderful day. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like that. It's priceless, well thought out, and well played. That was a smooth move to move him to accounting to avoid all of the paperwork. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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I like that. It's priceless, well thought out, and well played. That was a smooth move to move him to accounting to avoid all of the paperwork. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, friend. I really appreciate the generous stars, Jeffrey. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. Have a great nihgt.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This eighty-word flash fiction story, Dealing with Charles, has the proper word count and tells the bittersweet tale of Charles' promotion to accounting and recent death, not necessarily in that order.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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This eighty-word flash fiction story, Dealing with Charles, has the proper word count and tells the bittersweet tale of Charles' promotion to accounting and recent death, not necessarily in that order.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Bill. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
Great 80 words flash fiction. Good word count. The presentation is nice. The topic is very funny and clever. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend,
Great 80 words flash fiction. Good word count. The presentation is nice. The topic is very funny and clever. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Gypsy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You can't be serious. But of course, this is fiction. Very good, exactly what needed to be done. The picture looks much like he is sleeping. This is a good imaginative story. Good luck in the Contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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You can't be serious. But of course, this is fiction. Very good, exactly what needed to be done. The picture looks much like he is sleeping. This is a good imaginative story. Good luck in the Contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Raffaelina. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from RShipp
"Great. Do you know how much paperwork there is to fill out when someone dies in your department?" I'm sorry for Charles. But I lost it. I even woke the dog up laughing!
Then... 'I quietly dragged Charles over to Accounting' The dog had to leave the room, he was so embarrassed.
I loved it!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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"Great. Do you know how much paperwork there is to fill out when someone dies in your department?" I'm sorry for Charles. But I lost it. I even woke the dog up laughing!
Then... 'I quietly dragged Charles over to Accounting' The dog had to leave the room, he was so embarrassed.
I loved it!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the excellent review and the big sixer, RS. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Sorry it woke your dog, lol. Have a good one and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from bob cullen
You got my vote. I loved the ending. I figured you must be a government employee. They have perfected the art of passing the buck.
Your character deserves a promotion.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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You got my vote. I loved the ending. I figured you must be a government employee. They have perfected the art of passing the buck.
Your character deserves a promotion.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Bob. I really appreciate the generous stars and support, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Spitfire
An out and out laugh with the ending of this short piece. That secretary should be in charge of things. Unfortunately, she can't tell anyone her plan. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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An out and out laugh with the ending of this short piece. That secretary should be in charge of things. Unfortunately, she can't tell anyone her plan. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Spitfire. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle out of this silly piece. Yeah, she should be running the place, that's for sure. Lol. Have a great night and thank you again.
Ron
