Earth's Plan
Nature at work15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. It is nice to see you back and feeling better. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This is a very nice and very well written haiku poem you have penned for the contest. It is nice to see you back and feeling better. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you Teri for reading my work. Your comments and stars are awesome.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hi Henry,
Sorry, you were down in the dumps and hope you are feeling much better. This is a cute Haiku about nature. That's a beautiful passion flower, especially the lavender color. Of course, the bumblebees love to get the pollen from the inside of the flower. The earth does have a plan for the flowers and especially large black bumblebees:-). I bet you have a beautiful garden. Nice poem and you met the requirements. Good job on this haiku. Stay safe. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Henry,
Sorry, you were down in the dumps and hope you are feeling much better. This is a cute Haiku about nature. That's a beautiful passion flower, especially the lavender color. Of course, the bumblebees love to get the pollen from the inside of the flower. The earth does have a plan for the flowers and especially large black bumblebees:-). I bet you have a beautiful garden. Nice poem and you met the requirements. Good job on this haiku. Stay safe. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you Joyce for reading my poem. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
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You are welcome.
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Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "bumblebee
with future filled sacs", because of the use of the words future filled! That part was hopeful to me!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Proverbs 16:4 New International Version (NIV)
4 The Lord works out everything to its proper end--
even the wicked for a day of disaster.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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My favorite part was, "bumblebee
with future filled sacs", because of the use of the words future filled! That part was hopeful to me!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Proverbs 16:4 New International Version (NIV)
4 The Lord works out everything to its proper end--
even the wicked for a day of disaster.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Fonda what a wonderful comparison Proverb 16:4 and my haiku. Thank you very much for reading my work. Your comments and stars are awesome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. Your syllables are correct per line. The words paint their own picture, but the one included is great. Those black bees have become scarce. Your flower is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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You did a good job with your contest entry. Your syllables are correct per line. The words paint their own picture, but the one included is great. Those black bees have become scarce. Your flower is beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Jan, thank you very much for reading my little poem. Your comments and stars are awesome.
Comment from Ben Colder
The poem made me think about washing my car from all this pollen falling from trees where I live. Well done Bro in arms. Best to you. Pick your chin up, never know what tomorrow brings. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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The poem made me think about washing my car from all this pollen falling from trees where I live. Well done Bro in arms. Best to you. Pick your chin up, never know what tomorrow brings. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you Ben for reading my poem. I had a couple of Pinyon trees which shed pollen like that. Took them out and planted Crape Myrtles to replace them. Your stars and comments are awesome.
