Earth's Plan
Nature at work15 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you
for the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well. May you stay well and safe.
Hope you had a good weekend!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you
for the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well. May you stay well and safe.
Hope you had a good weekend!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you harmony13 for reading my little poem. Your comments and stars are awesome.
Comment from Spitfire
good point in your author notes, Henry. Thank goodness, the virus hasn't affected nature. Great use of alliteration in your haiku with the p and f sounds.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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good point in your author notes, Henry. Thank goodness, the virus hasn't affected nature. Great use of alliteration in your haiku with the p and f sounds.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for reading my little poem Spitfire. Your comments and stars are awesome.
Comment from June Sargent
I enjoyed your piece about the way nature reminds us of its resilience. This time of year, we can see the birds, bees and flowers returning to our gardens. New beginnings. I am glad you are able now to take a little walk in your garden. Take care and thank you for sharing some of the sunshine.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your piece about the way nature reminds us of its resilience. This time of year, we can see the birds, bees and flowers returning to our gardens. New beginnings. I am glad you are able now to take a little walk in your garden. Take care and thank you for sharing some of the sunshine.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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June, thank you very much for reading my haiku. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes it's the little things that catch our eyes. I'm glad you're starting to feel better and you were able to embrace some of what nature has to offer. I went back to work a couple days ago since I broke my foot. It was a nice 6 weeks off but I suppose it's time to get back to reality.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Sometimes it's the little things that catch our eyes. I'm glad you're starting to feel better and you were able to embrace some of what nature has to offer. I went back to work a couple days ago since I broke my foot. It was a nice 6 weeks off but I suppose it's time to get back to reality.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for reading my little poem. Your comments and stars are wonderfuls
Comment from susand3022
Hi Henry, It seems that parts of nature have been in recovery while we've been in quarantine. They say the stars have never been brighter in the night skies. With all the factories shut down everywhere, pollution has cleared up considerably. Of course, with no one going to work, driving is down a good bit and nobody is visiting, flying or anything else. All that adds up. (personally, I think we seem to be doing pretty well by internet... a lot of us anyway. I'm not saying that we should all stay home all the time by any means, but if working and schooling from home is an option, then people will have a chance to be at home with their children again, perhaps families will develop again, and neighborhoods. Perhaps it will once again be safe to let your kids go out and play... without you hanging on their every move I mean. Things like this could end up moving us toward good things... in the end. A lot more web visits to the doctor's office... (how many times did you get the flu waiting to see the doctor over a hurt body part or something that had nothing to do with sickness?)
I liked your Haiku... we need more bumblebees... perhaps with us in here for a little while... now planting more gardens for something to do with our time... they'll make a comeback! :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Henry, It seems that parts of nature have been in recovery while we've been in quarantine. They say the stars have never been brighter in the night skies. With all the factories shut down everywhere, pollution has cleared up considerably. Of course, with no one going to work, driving is down a good bit and nobody is visiting, flying or anything else. All that adds up. (personally, I think we seem to be doing pretty well by internet... a lot of us anyway. I'm not saying that we should all stay home all the time by any means, but if working and schooling from home is an option, then people will have a chance to be at home with their children again, perhaps families will develop again, and neighborhoods. Perhaps it will once again be safe to let your kids go out and play... without you hanging on their every move I mean. Things like this could end up moving us toward good things... in the end. A lot more web visits to the doctor's office... (how many times did you get the flu waiting to see the doctor over a hurt body part or something that had nothing to do with sickness?)
I liked your Haiku... we need more bumblebees... perhaps with us in here for a little while... now planting more gardens for something to do with our time... they'll make a comeback! :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank your very much for reading my poem Susan. Your stars and comments are awesome. I live by myself. A sixty-year old daughter, my eldest, is near. She has more serious underlaying conditions than I, and she has good reasons for self distancing. My underlying condition is only age. If I catch the sniffles, flu or my arthritis acts up, I'm my own care taker.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, comforting piece. Seeing the normality in nature--business and pleasure as usual--is soothing.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, comforting piece. Seeing the normality in nature--business and pleasure as usual--is soothing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you Janice for reading my poem. Your stars and comments are awesome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about earth's plan to pollinate each and every flower in the garden with the help of the busy bees, that will ensure the future growth of each flower.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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A very well-written haiku about earth's plan to pollinate each and every flower in the garden with the help of the busy bees, that will ensure the future growth of each flower.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading my little poem. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Yes nature will continue on long after we try to destroy it. Very well done haiku, using the bumblebee for the representation of the season, spring. The image of the full sacs is spot on. Using the first line for the satori is well done
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Yes nature will continue on long after we try to destroy it. Very well done haiku, using the bumblebee for the representation of the season, spring. The image of the full sacs is spot on. Using the first line for the satori is well done
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reading my little poem Barb. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, yes. From our grandiose ivory towers we sometimes take for granted the intricate, precise dance with which nature orchestrates the cycle of life.
Indeed, bees and wind are as important to life on this planet as a million John Deere tractors.
Glad you're feeling better.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Ah, yes. From our grandiose ivory towers we sometimes take for granted the intricate, precise dance with which nature orchestrates the cycle of life.
Indeed, bees and wind are as important to life on this planet as a million John Deere tractors.
Glad you're feeling better.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thanks Lee for reading my poem. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Perfect syllable count on a haiku, with a subject full of import. Great 'p' alliteration, 'f' alliteration, and long 'e' assonance with 'reaper' and 'bumblebee' as well. Thanks for posting a haiku that helps us all to remember even the smallest (or nearly so) creature can accomplish something great. It is a reminder that even our smallest efforts are full of promise.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Perfect syllable count on a haiku, with a subject full of import. Great 'p' alliteration, 'f' alliteration, and long 'e' assonance with 'reaper' and 'bumblebee' as well. Thanks for posting a haiku that helps us all to remember even the smallest (or nearly so) creature can accomplish something great. It is a reminder that even our smallest efforts are full of promise.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank your very much for reading my poem. Your comments and stars are wonderful.
