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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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And what a magnificient golden fleece to find. What a magnificient piece another in dedication to a fine young man, taken too soon, but his life was spent helping others

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Yes I miss my Jason but I'm living with it. And, I know he's Happy.
    Happy and waiting patiently.
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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As we're growing up, we try to do our best, but we're always looking at that next stage of life expecting it to be better... and, one day, after a lot of 'looking' time is past, we find peace with whom we are....;) :) A great offering, Ricky -- thanx for sharing! ;)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks again.
    Ricky
Comment from MARIANNE GI
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If this doesn't win the prize, I will give it to you myself! I don't know what words to use to comment on your work. It is...oh my God so clever, so unbelievably clever, I really wish you good luck !!!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    When it comes to the Contest?
    I didn't enter one Marianne but when I see your beautiful face and review.
    I think I already won!
    A Beautiful Poet likes my work?
    I can't go wrong!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by MARIANNE GI on 10-Apr-2020
    Ha ha thank you so much , you made my day! So have a wonderful day, too!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    "Roses are Red and Violets are Blue"
    (4 Your Eyes Only)
    A Love Poem
    Written on April 14, 2014
    By Doctor Ricky 1025
    Copyright © Fanstory 2014
    'All Rights Reserved'
    Rose's are Red and Violets are Blue and I think that I'm going out of my head over you.
    Now Marianne,
    If Roses are Red and Violets are Blue and I think I am going out of my head over you then why, am I, now going out of my mind...
    Over you?...
    But, of course Violets are so, so, Blue
    and Roses are so, so, Red but...
    ...
    Even God Above is Greater than these beautiful words of love and when I look into your Beautiful Blue eyes Marianne...
    My Love for You!
    You
    Must
    Now
    Realize?
    Ricky
reply by MARIANNE GI on 11-Apr-2020
    WAs that for me???? Is it????
    Sorry if i delay with my answers but Greece time is different
reply by MARIANNE GI on 11-Apr-2020
    Thank you very much for everything you sent to me. You made me feel very happy. Thank you from all my heart