NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Two Triangles"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
"Same story, different year." LOL! So true. Favorite lines in this poem are:
"Two triangles find togetherness
living as a square or diamond,
and it's not always flawless,"
Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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"Same story, different year." LOL! So true. Favorite lines in this poem are:
"Two triangles find togetherness
living as a square or diamond,
and it's not always flawless,"
Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Marilyn. You're nice. Thank you. God bless you :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautifully presented nonet/reverse nonet for the contest, Alicia! ;) :) I would only point out that the word 'different' has 3 syllables so you'll need to put an apostrophe in there like
diff'rent
so that the 'nonet' pattern works! ;) Thanx for sharing and keep 'em coming! ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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A beautifully presented nonet/reverse nonet for the contest, Alicia! ;) :) I would only point out that the word 'different' has 3 syllables so you'll need to put an apostrophe in there like
diff'rent
so that the 'nonet' pattern works! ;) Thanx for sharing and keep 'em coming! ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi Yvette! Great, I appreciate the edit. Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written concrete poem by forming two triangles to make a diamon shape about the NaPoWriMo challenge for 2020. Great work and a very good presentation.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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A very well-written concrete poem by forming two triangles to make a diamon shape about the NaPoWriMo challenge for 2020. Great work and a very good presentation.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra! Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from LisaMay
Thank you for this appealing pairing, combining music and design. You have been very skilful in getting the line lengths to cooperate to make the shapes for the concrete aspect.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this appealing pairing, combining music and design. You have been very skilful in getting the line lengths to cooperate to make the shapes for the concrete aspect.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi LisaMay! You're nice. Thank you. God bless you :)
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:) xx
Comment from lyenochka
Cool pair of nonets which results in two triangles. I like that you used a nonet on the ninth day of the challenge and you picked just the right picture for this poem!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Cool pair of nonets which results in two triangles. I like that you used a nonet on the ninth day of the challenge and you picked just the right picture for this poem!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! You're the best. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
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♥♥
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your commitment to NaPoWriMo and for sharing your creations. I really admired your concrete, shaped poem consisting of two nonets, which could not have been easy to achieve. I also appreciated being acquainted with a category of musical instruments with which I was not familiar. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your commitment to NaPoWriMo and for sharing your creations. I really admired your concrete, shaped poem consisting of two nonets, which could not have been easy to achieve. I also appreciated being acquainted with a category of musical instruments with which I was not familiar. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! More people should play triangles. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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I tip my hat to that! More smiles- Joan
Comment from royowen
Well done Alicia, I'm honestly not very good with the cryptic as riddles often come like that, these two triangles are very written my friend, and with some great leverage to boot, I wish you a happy Easter, May your Easter eggs be big ones and you Easter bunnies the same, with lots of butter. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Well done Alicia, I'm honestly not very good with the cryptic as riddles often come like that, these two triangles are very written my friend, and with some great leverage to boot, I wish you a happy Easter, May your Easter eggs be big ones and you Easter bunnies the same, with lots of butter. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! You're the best. Thank you.
Happy Easter! God bless you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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Bless you Alicia
