Tandem Bike
Winter Haiku 4/7/615 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A powerful and eerie atmosphere created here with so few words - heightens the reader's awareness leaving him/her with many questions to ponder -superb
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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A powerful and eerie atmosphere created here with so few words - heightens the reader's awareness leaving him/her with many questions to ponder -superb
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
A very nicely crafted haiku and it is we;; presented. May you have a blessed rest of this week and do stay safe and healthy.
Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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A very nicely crafted haiku and it is we;; presented. May you have a blessed rest of this week and do stay safe and healthy.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from kahpot
The lonely mind can conjure up many past pleasant thoughts, though still alone we find comfort, your last line is quite chilling really, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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The lonely mind can conjure up many past pleasant thoughts, though still alone we find comfort, your last line is quite chilling really, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
It's like sitting at a table for two when there's only one. Your haiku is well worded, and also nicely complemented by the picture, which casts a grey atmosphere - like that felt by the lonely tandem rider down that cold, dark street. Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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It's like sitting at a table for two when there's only one. Your haiku is well worded, and also nicely complemented by the picture, which casts a grey atmosphere - like that felt by the lonely tandem rider down that cold, dark street. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow.... that last line just shouts lonely and yearning ... cool way to portray that emotion!! ;) Coupled with the cold wind, this one leaves the reader with a very 'desolate' feeling even amidst a crowd... :( Great job! ;) Yvette
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Wow.... that last line just shouts lonely and yearning ... cool way to portray that emotion!! ;) Coupled with the cold wind, this one leaves the reader with a very 'desolate' feeling even amidst a crowd... :( Great job! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review. I am so happy you got me. Stay safe, Yvette.
