Glimpse of Day
Close your eyes, open your arms, and remember with me...35 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
I like your homonym poem. It has the right syllable count. The photo of a perfectly clear sky has a nice effect. I like your words and the use of blue and blew. The use of the word "wistful" makes your poem really powerful. Good luck in the contest. Stay well.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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I like your homonym poem. It has the right syllable count. The photo of a perfectly clear sky has a nice effect. I like your words and the use of blue and blew. The use of the word "wistful" makes your poem really powerful. Good luck in the contest. Stay well.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Cindy - take care out there!
Comment from Minglement
Great use of this poem form for the 1 - 10 - Homonym contest. I love you clear, free illustration and your choice of wprds - blue/blew. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Great use of this poem form for the 1 - 10 - Homonym contest. I love you clear, free illustration and your choice of wprds - blue/blew. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Marcia - take care!
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My pleasure :) Stay well.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Succinct contest entry, YM. I like your choice of homonyms. Your color scheme and image are perfect for your well-chosen words. Your syllable count in line two is perfect, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Succinct contest entry, YM. I like your choice of homonyms. Your color scheme and image are perfect for your well-chosen words. Your syllable count in line two is perfect, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Jan - take care!
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely image you've painted in just three short lines! This is the most beautiful time of year - and we have to stay indoors! Try to remember...
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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What a lovely image you've painted in just three short lines! This is the most beautiful time of year - and we have to stay indoors! Try to remember...
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, June - take care!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever play on these two words here Yvette and there is nothing like a gentle breeze and a blue sky to lift the spirit, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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A clever play on these two words here Yvette and there is nothing like a gentle breeze and a blue sky to lift the spirit, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Dolly -- take care!
