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He Is Always With Me

Rhyming poem of faith.

10 total reviews 
Comment from Janetsue
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This is a very comforting poem, my friend. We all have struggles and it helps to know that we are not going through them alone. Christ sent us the Holy Spirit as our great Comforter. It's sad not to be able to attend church this Easter Sunday, but we can still feel the Lord's presence and glorify Him with our thoughts and actions every day.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the fine review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written inspiring and comforting poem about the knowledge that God is with us through every threat and trial that is coming our way. He will not let us go through this alone.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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The Lord's promises to us in the Bible are always precious, but are especially so at times like these. Your poem is well-written, moving, and inspirational.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from BethShelby
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Nicely written poem. It has good rhyme and rhythm and best of all it expresses you faith and helps you witness to other. This is a lovely picture you chose for you poem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from Mistydawn
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What a beautifully-written spiritual poem with a strong message behind it. Something we all need to remember in this trying time. That he's with us no matter what comes our way. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a very nicely composed poem, Patricia. Please God to be with the world especially now in this time of crisis. And, now it's is Holy Week in which we won't be able to go to worship. We will be doing it through the TV at home. He knows.
Happy Easter,
Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello Patcelaw,

I love the title and the words in the photo," He will never leave you nor forsake you." Awesome and so true. You are so right, Jesus is the answer to all our problems. He's a problem-solver. Beautiful poem. Yes, He will always hold your hand, as long as you trust Him. Beautiful last stanza with words of hope and love. Great poem. Great rhyming within your beautiful spiritual poem. This is such a poem of Hope. No errors. The words flowed nicely. Good job!!! I like your profile photo.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from judiverse
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Lovely, inspirational thoughts in this. Great use of metaphor describing Jesus as a high tower and a solid tower. A high tower would have a vantage point, being able to watch over things. You conclude with the thought that Jesus will be with you to the end. judi

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
reply by judiverse on 06-Apr-2020
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Yes, He is our friend and with us 24/7. He comforts as no one else can. He suffers with us, provides protection by hiding us in the cliff of the rock, and covering us with His Hand.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem reads like a prayer--and a very good one, Patricia. Your rhymes are great, the picture is perfect, and your message is awesome and so true. I'm thrilled you shared this with FS. I know how much your faith means to you. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate your thoughts.