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A veggie tale

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Comment from Mistydawn
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What a great description of a pea. I don't care for the veggie myself unless it's in something like a stew or a potpie. The picture reminds me of the time I spent shucking the peas with grandma. Nice job. Good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thank You!
reply by Mistydawn on 06-Apr-2020
    It made me think of joke about pea green soup but I didn't write it because I wasn't sure you wanted to hear it.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    LOL Thank You!
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Brenda, I liked the homonyms you chose... pee and pea, I'm not certain how you went from pee to pea, I might have done it the other way around... it is a cute poem though :)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    You're right! It probably would have made more sense in the reverse. LOL
Comment from Earl Corp
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You picked a weird homonym with the first word being urine. The picture kind of ruins the surprise of it being about vegetables. This was an odd contest to begin with anyway. Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thanks! You're right it was odd! 🙂