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Lamentations of a Lost Laddy

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My Autobiography

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Comment from Gail Denham
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There will doubtless be much more of these folks needing help - wondering what they can buy for 50c - I keep watching for some, perhaps in our church, who have a family to feed - so that I can share more. Your pasta dish sounds pretty good - but how can you eat chiles with your condition - I could not I think.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much Gail and really appreciate your comments. Nice to connect with you here with some similar ideals, values, and respect. are the Chili's don't bother me too much if they're chopped up and in with tomatoes and then baked into a dish. Thanks again for your wonderful comments.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from Janetsue
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I love your posting Darren. (And I appreciate the yummy recipe, too.) I'm also a chocoholic. A sudden craving developed while I was reading this but I'm not going to indulge myself and walk down to the store. Your mom took a gorgeous picture! :-) Janet

re: 1st line, 2nd paragraph -- Ideally l like shopping at grocery outlet,

--- a grocery outlet; or --: at grocery outlets.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks Janet, your comments fulfilled my day. Always a cheerio!

    Blessings,

    Darren
Comment from lyenochka
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So glad to see you branching out to prose, Darren. Thanks for taking us along during your day, writing and editing poetry while biking to the store, noticing people and having the compassion to give money to people and ending with a recipe! Wow!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much Helen I'm enjoying the dinner right now as we speak. I came upon a new interesting shape of pasta called ratchete`,
    And after baked it came out looking like a pie.
    Thanks,

    Darren
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written journal entry if spontaneous action on a Sunday morning going to buy groceries for a meal and the thoughts of born poet makes it an interesting experience.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much Sandra your comment is well-received and now I'm off to make dinner.

    Thank you so much,

    Darren