Reversed Mirror
could be you???3 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hello Poet, I really liked this a lot... I liked the thought process and how when he was on the other side of the mirror he saw himself the way he really was by way of his picture.
Your rhyme fell off in the sixth stanza. I don't know if you got caught up in your message and forgot your wording... I do that sometimes... but you forgot your rhyme.
A very cool poem :)
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Hello Poet, I really liked this a lot... I liked the thought process and how when he was on the other side of the mirror he saw himself the way he really was by way of his picture.
Your rhyme fell off in the sixth stanza. I don't know if you got caught up in your message and forgot your wording... I do that sometimes... but you forgot your rhyme.
A very cool poem :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
Comment from Enoima Okon
Dear Pragmatic Poet,
Indeed mirrors are unforgiving. They reflect to us our true colours which we sometimes choose to ignore. They work along with our conscience.
Sometimes we wait until it's too late to make amends of our wrongs.
I love the fact that in your story line, there was a reverse upon the man, what a big lesson to learn!
Well done.
Eno
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Dear Pragmatic Poet,
Indeed mirrors are unforgiving. They reflect to us our true colours which we sometimes choose to ignore. They work along with our conscience.
Sometimes we wait until it's too late to make amends of our wrongs.
I love the fact that in your story line, there was a reverse upon the man, what a big lesson to learn!
Well done.
Eno
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Fascinating idea to use the mirror as a reverse image on Dorian's Grey portrait. I quite like the intricate images of paranoia, philosophy and more. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Fascinating idea to use the mirror as a reverse image on Dorian's Grey portrait. I quite like the intricate images of paranoia, philosophy and more. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
