Learning Colors
Child describing how to learn colors15 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is very cute, clever, and very well thought out. You've done an excellent job expressing creatively how children learn their colors. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This is very cute, clever, and very well thought out. You've done an excellent job expressing creatively how children learn their colors. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for such a nice review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was a fun poem to read, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. I can see youngsters learning their colors from things in nature instead of sitting and looking at pictures. Your rhymes are good, there is good flow, and the message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This was a fun poem to read, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. I can see youngsters learning their colors from things in nature instead of sitting and looking at pictures. Your rhymes are good, there is good flow, and the message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the nice review! I appreciate it.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, for the most part this poem is well written, but when I read it out loud to my self, the rhythm was rough, particularly in the last two lines. You are not restricted in syllable or word count for this contest are you?
If this poem were mine I would write :
" All the colors are there FOR YOU to see.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Dear Author, for the most part this poem is well written, but when I read it out loud to my self, the rhythm was rough, particularly in the last two lines. You are not restricted in syllable or word count for this contest are you?
If this poem were mine I would write :
" All the colors are there FOR YOU to see.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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I was confused by your last suggestion, so I pulled out my notebook with all my scribbles. That IS how I wrote it, and then typed it wrong. I should have noticed because the line even looks short! Thank you very much!
Comment from zanya
These stanzas are oh so cute and told so effectively from that beautiful perspective of awe and innocent -as only children can accomplish -such a fun way to get acquainted with color
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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These stanzas are oh so cute and told so effectively from that beautiful perspective of awe and innocent -as only children can accomplish -such a fun way to get acquainted with color
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for such a nice review!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh what a fun colorful offering for this contest -- great fun for the parent to read and the child to listen and sing along!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Oh what a fun colorful offering for this contest -- great fun for the parent to read and the child to listen and sing along!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review. It was fun to write!
