A chance encounter limerick
Meeting again after a few years9 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
You have meet the requirements of the contest. Write a Limerick on any subject. Follow the form of a limerick. Rhyme a a b b a. Syllable count: 9-9-5-5-9.
A job well done. Ouch! A little too honest? Enjoyed!!
I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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You have meet the requirements of the contest. Write a Limerick on any subject. Follow the form of a limerick. Rhyme a a b b a. Syllable count: 9-9-5-5-9.
A job well done. Ouch! A little too honest? Enjoyed!!
I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Perfect limerick for the contest about aging, and it is so true, some have the ability to age gracefully, but some, like me have been through the ringer and fit this perfecty . Had to chuckle
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Perfect limerick for the contest about aging, and it is so true, some have the ability to age gracefully, but some, like me have been through the ringer and fit this perfecty . Had to chuckle
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thanks a lot Barb. So glad you like it. Jen
Comment from kahpot
This is an excellent limerick (picking) on someone you have not seen for some time, (looking butch) great humor, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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This is an excellent limerick (picking) on someone you have not seen for some time, (looking butch) great humor, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I am not so sure I would want someone talking about me like that ha ha This is a good Limerick that should catch attention in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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I am not so sure I would want someone talking about me like that ha ha This is a good Limerick that should catch attention in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much. Jen.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, I think the comments could go to both genders but I think it would be rather "unkind" to express these observations aloud. Great job with your limerick. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Lol. Well, I think the comments could go to both genders but I think it would be rather "unkind" to express these observations aloud. Great job with your limerick. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Many hanks Helen for your comments Jen.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this limerick though it could offend some thin-skinned readers. We get a vivid portrait of the woman the Speaker encountered and your rhymes are well-chosen. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed this limerick though it could offend some thin-skinned readers. We get a vivid portrait of the woman the Speaker encountered and your rhymes are well-chosen. Rod
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanks Rod. Glad you njoyedit. Jen.
Comment from Puzzle
Omg hahahhaha. This is so mean! Lol. But I'd be lying if I didn't think these thoughts myself. You just have the guts to put it in poetic form. This follows the form and probably will have a good shot at winning the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Omg hahahhaha. This is so mean! Lol. But I'd be lying if I didn't think these thoughts myself. You just have the guts to put it in poetic form. This follows the form and probably will have a good shot at winning the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanks a lot. I'm so glad it made you laugh. Jen.
Comment from pome lover
well, for someone who says he doesn't want to be unkind, he did a pretty good job of it. Rudeness personified.
I do hope she came back with a like rebuttal, such as:
Gee, thanks; you're looking fit and thin,
So, how's life in the loony bin?
Or some such.
pome lover
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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well, for someone who says he doesn't want to be unkind, he did a pretty good job of it. Rudeness personified.
I do hope she came back with a like rebuttal, such as:
Gee, thanks; you're looking fit and thin,
So, how's life in the loony bin?
Or some such.
pome lover
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanks a lot. Jen.
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Jen - I'm sorry. Didn't mean to be rude to you. Just thought "he" was.
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No problem. Didn't notice. Take care. Jen
Comment from country ranch writer
Grandpa always said, "if you don't have anything nice to say about someone don't say it at all!" Just keep it to yourself.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Grandpa always said, "if you don't have anything nice to say about someone don't say it at all!" Just keep it to yourself.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for the review and the stars. Much appreciate Jen.
