Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

'Feel now this message.'
'Yes, that my broken Heart is now sending to you!'
'And, so, so, very pure!'
'Very pure and clear!'

this is so emotional and well said

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020

This one came out pretty quick I think I wrote it in about 4 minutes.
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

An attention capturing title. A pretty good opening stanza. Very good second stanza, the last line was sad. Very good third stanza. This could be a great song, thank for sharing

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020

And thank you for sharing also beizanten.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

With the passing years such a tragic death is never forgotten Ricky and we live with this grief but never really get over it as part of us dies inside, I am so sorry for your loss, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020

I carry the pain in my heart...
I carry the shame on my sleeve...
And I carried the destruction of me in my soul...
Thanks,
Ricky

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 04-Apr-2020

So sorry to hear that Ricky, you must learn to forgive yourself, love Dolly x