The Lookout
Another series of the Unknown.4 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
gathering, one of (makes it a sentence)
Very nicely told and as I said before, I am a believer. A restless spirit whose job is not done yet. Very well done
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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gathering, one of (makes it a sentence)
Very nicely told and as I said before, I am a believer. A restless spirit whose job is not done yet. Very well done
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Barb, for the review and stars.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very weird story. When you break it down it becomes obvious that there would not be a native Indian riding a horse sparsely dressed, carrying a spear and daring to follow a cowboy, during our timet The conclusion: FACT.
The story is very well written with descriptive prose.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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This is a very weird story. When you break it down it becomes obvious that there would not be a native Indian riding a horse sparsely dressed, carrying a spear and daring to follow a cowboy, during our timet The conclusion: FACT.
The story is very well written with descriptive prose.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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As always, Raffaelina, thanks for the review and stars.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Question of believing fact is not important, expression is; you have expressed the story about a cowboy of a hill area in India with a lot of questions asked or put before the readers; well said.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Question of believing fact is not important, expression is; you have expressed the story about a cowboy of a hill area in India with a lot of questions asked or put before the readers; well said.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you, for the review and stars. Glad you liked this one.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Willie, this is an interesting tale, such as it is. It makes the reader contemplate the wonders of the great beyond. I would bring to your attention that it's not poetry. It's a story and should be posted with stories. I think it would get plenty of attention there. :)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Hi Willie, this is an interesting tale, such as it is. It makes the reader contemplate the wonders of the great beyond. I would bring to your attention that it's not poetry. It's a story and should be posted with stories. I think it would get plenty of attention there. :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thanks for the review, my mistake.
