Water Colours
Dean's life45 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Victor, I miss him too my sweet friend...
I keep hoping his name will pop up...sigh...I understand why he put the last stanza on his web site...very well written...with the perfect picture...I love your poem...God Bless...and be safe...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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HI Victor, I miss him too my sweet friend...
I keep hoping his name will pop up...sigh...I understand why he put the last stanza on his web site...very well written...with the perfect picture...I love your poem...God Bless...and be safe...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Linda.
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your so welcome Victor...xxoo love
Comment from Maureen Sky
Very nice poem and one can certainly relate to the written words. I see loved ones searching for love and it pains me when their relationships fail. It truly is like "the canvas bleeds away." The watercolor picture here is great too! Good job here!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Very nice poem and one can certainly relate to the written words. I see loved ones searching for love and it pains me when their relationships fail. It truly is like "the canvas bleeds away." The watercolor picture here is great too! Good job here!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from closetpoetjester
This was very touching review to leave with Dean. As someone who paints and thinks when I paint, I can appreciate the human parallels with all those colours running together almost like human emotions and actions...sometimes beautiful, sometimes one big fucking mess. You never really know what you're going to get until the dynamics happen to be honest. But I guess you have to take the chance and be bold. Nicely done.
I'm sure Dean would be smiling at you over this one.
Many people here I'm sure would be missing him
Cheers P
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This was very touching review to leave with Dean. As someone who paints and thinks when I paint, I can appreciate the human parallels with all those colours running together almost like human emotions and actions...sometimes beautiful, sometimes one big fucking mess. You never really know what you're going to get until the dynamics happen to be honest. But I guess you have to take the chance and be bold. Nicely done.
I'm sure Dean would be smiling at you over this one.
Many people here I'm sure would be missing him
Cheers P
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Closet. It's been a while.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Perfect image and poem about the end of a relationship. Excellent presentation. The rhyme and rhythm worked well with this piece. The last verse was very clever having water colours bleed from the canvas. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Perfect image and poem about the end of a relationship. Excellent presentation. The rhyme and rhythm worked well with this piece. The last verse was very clever having water colours bleed from the canvas. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. ~Brenda
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Yhank you, Brenda.
Comment from Boogienights
Great imagery in this poem , I can see the colors dimming as they run. I like the comparison to a broken love, torn apart and bleeding. It all works so well, as does the picture you included. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Great imagery in this poem , I can see the colors dimming as they run. I like the comparison to a broken love, torn apart and bleeding. It all works so well, as does the picture you included. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Well, I'm very pleased you found it so. Thank you. Doug
Comment from Lise Deangelo
You use exquisite imagery with:
"Just water colours
left out in the rain,"
This is a beautifully written and evocative look at love's power. It can certainly make us vulnerable. But on the upside, it is all-enduring. Thanks for sharing this poem written for Dean.
:)Lise
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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You use exquisite imagery with:
"Just water colours
left out in the rain,"
This is a beautifully written and evocative look at love's power. It can certainly make us vulnerable. But on the upside, it is all-enduring. Thanks for sharing this poem written for Dean.
:)Lise
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Lise.
Comment from victor 66
Dean Kuch will be remembered on this website as long as someone remembers him here on Fan Story. He gave so much to many of us, not the least was his talent. Thank you for recalling one of the few friends I've had.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Dean Kuch will be remembered on this website as long as someone remembers him here on Fan Story. He gave so much to many of us, not the least was his talent. Thank you for recalling one of the few friends I've had.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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My pleasure. Although I do consider you an acquaintance. LOL Doug
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Ok
Comment from MARIANNE GI
What a unique way to describe those feelings and the picture also so representative. Sad and also makes you think. Very nice work and very sensitive. Marianne
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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What a unique way to describe those feelings and the picture also so representative. Sad and also makes you think. Very nice work and very sensitive. Marianne
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Marianne.
Comment from Raul1
This person doesn't sound friendly. I think that he is mean. Well written poem. Thanks for sharing! No grammatical errors. I like it. Excellent work! The words rhymes and are aligned.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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This person doesn't sound friendly. I think that he is mean. Well written poem. Thanks for sharing! No grammatical errors. I like it. Excellent work! The words rhymes and are aligned.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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I think his life was a bit mean to him. Thank you. Doug
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You're welcome.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent free verse, I know that Dean's wife had left him, and I guess it was very perplexing for him, as it would for anyone who's been hit by that, Dean could be very fierce at times, we both had strong views which clashed at one time. Well done Doug, exceptional verse. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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This is an excellent free verse, I know that Dean's wife had left him, and I guess it was very perplexing for him, as it would for anyone who's been hit by that, Dean could be very fierce at times, we both had strong views which clashed at one time. Well done Doug, exceptional verse. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate it.
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Good job
