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Just a Theatre Play?

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7 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Corona, masks, gloves, scrubbing and washing for twenty seconds, disinfecting, isolation, social distancing, storing supplies, writing, praying is all we think about nowadays.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Thank you for 'reviewing' Rebecca!!!
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 04-Apr-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from GregoryCody
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This is topical And very good! I love your choices and the dialogue in a way. Reads smoothly and FUN.

Trump filibuster. Sanitize lol.

GREAT JOB!!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Hahahaha ... thx for the lovely sixer, Greg! New verse:

    I?m really good at hand-washing?
    the best in our great nation!
    That virus I?ll be ki-boshing
    with such exfoliation!

Comment from LisaMay
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Your poem echoes my sentiments exactly about Trump's lack of leadership and his displays of fuzzy logic in this crisis. Here's cheers with Corona beers!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    "Fuzzy" is being too polite, Lisa!!!! f
reply by LisaMay on 03-Apr-2020
    Well, it started with an 'F'.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Mine too, but Fanstorians would have a heart attack.
Comment from kahpot
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Love the word "filibuster" it suits very well, yes he has made a bit of a mess of this over there, very well written-quite humorous on a sad subject, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Thx Kahpot!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha,ha funny one, you made my day I will pass on this stanza that change the circumstance ;that Trump is just as theatre play
(like Two Gents in Verona)
And we'll all live another day--
So ... pass that cold Corona!
"
Than k you and stay safe:)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Hahaha thanks Iza!
Comment from Mark Valentine
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My favorite line is the first line of your author's note - the rest of the lines are good too. It would be hard to create a fictional president that was worse at his job than Trump, and yet, his base stands behind him.

I've a feeling there will be lots of Corona parties once this is over - gonna stock up on limes now.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    The Trump Squad is alive & well on FS, Mark, as is also the God Squad. :)
Comment from VanessaDanRun
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Thank you for sharing! This is a terrible and confusing time for sure! I feel like he doesn't even know what he is saying half the time he's talking to us! It's sad to see him forget people's names and even the name of the virus! lol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    "Forget" would imply a certain innocence, I'm afraid, Vanessa. There is NOTHING innocent about this wretch! GRRRR!