Greenbacks
An Eighty Word Flash Fiction10 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Well, Brett, he got away with it did he not? Doesn't happen very often. Well, good for him as he was prepared to gamble with his freedom. But some are willing to take the risk. Great little flash, and good luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Well, Brett, he got away with it did he not? Doesn't happen very often. Well, good for him as he was prepared to gamble with his freedom. But some are willing to take the risk. Great little flash, and good luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece of Flash Fiction. Seriously doubt if the contest committee will vote for it. But, appreciate your support and the review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about Mark Jackson's get rich quick scheme that seems to work out well for him and there is no trace of his success story after the clean up of the explosion.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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A very well-written flash fiction about Mark Jackson's get rich quick scheme that seems to work out well for him and there is no trace of his success story after the clean up of the explosion.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece of Flash Fiction. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Susan Larson
Very well written piece of flash fiction, but what I loved most was how the greenbacks "rained supreme," a double entendre on words and the value of money .this should be a winner!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Very well written piece of flash fiction, but what I loved most was how the greenbacks "rained supreme," a double entendre on words and the value of money .this should be a winner!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece of Flash Fiction. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is a good image
for your story, Brett.
-You set it up well with
effective imagery of
Mark, his pipe, and his actions.
-They definitely spoke
louder than words!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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-That is a good image
for your story, Brett.
-You set it up well with
effective imagery of
Mark, his pipe, and his actions.
-They definitely spoke
louder than words!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little posting. Appreciate the review.
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You are very welcome, Brett.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, he did have a plan, followed through, and reaped rewards. So I guess he is an entrepreneur. Your words are well-chosen with good imagery. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Well, he did have a plan, followed through, and reaped rewards. So I guess he is an entrepreneur. Your words are well-chosen with good imagery. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very nice flash fiction. It had all three components. I didn't find any errors. You painted a vivid picture with your words. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Very nice flash fiction. It had all three components. I didn't find any errors. You painted a vivid picture with your words. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece of Flash Fiction. Appreciate the review.
Comment from judiverse
You use your 80 words with precision and tell your story smoothly. Mark Jackson seems to have done his planning and used perfect timing. All that money flying through the air! What about passers-by? Would this have occurred late at night? He might have had competition for getting all that money. Great insight into what drives Mark Jackson. He doesn't want to toil in the underbelly of life. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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You use your 80 words with precision and tell your story smoothly. Mark Jackson seems to have done his planning and used perfect timing. All that money flying through the air! What about passers-by? Would this have occurred late at night? He might have had competition for getting all that money. Great insight into what drives Mark Jackson. He doesn't want to toil in the underbelly of life. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Bill Schott
This eighty-word story, Greenbacks, has the right word count and seems to create a scene where bank robber makes a less than quiet withdrawal and becomes a venture capitalist. Robber Barons loved by all.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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This eighty-word story, Greenbacks, has the right word count and seems to create a scene where bank robber makes a less than quiet withdrawal and becomes a venture capitalist. Robber Barons loved by all.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece of Flash Fiction. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest.
This short story about entrepreneur Mark is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest.
This short story about entrepreneur Mark is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great and very creative chapter in your story. I love the dialogue for the story it really fit the character and the time period. The action scene was really intense when the explosion happened at the National Bank. Great Flash Fiction poem!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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I think that you wrote a great and very creative chapter in your story. I love the dialogue for the story it really fit the character and the time period. The action scene was really intense when the explosion happened at the National Bank. Great Flash Fiction poem!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece of Flash Fiction. Appreciate the review.
