Once Betrayed
free verse poem...17 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
A truly haunting and eerie reflection of alarm Diana, of current
perils of politics while so any other more traumatic tragedies
have been ignored or dismissed apathetically. The economic
collapse referred to is indeed most threatening and altering
for what continues to happen and lingers ominously still ahead.
Thanks for sharing the warning and concern. It is out there!
Blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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A truly haunting and eerie reflection of alarm Diana, of current
perils of politics while so any other more traumatic tragedies
have been ignored or dismissed apathetically. The economic
collapse referred to is indeed most threatening and altering
for what continues to happen and lingers ominously still ahead.
Thanks for sharing the warning and concern. It is out there!
Blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much! It?s going to be quite different on the other side of this. So much is happening behind the scenes and I think we are all going to be quite surprised in spite of what it looks like right now. I hope you are well and staying safe! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I wish I could say I agree with that last line, Diana, but I'm not there yet, my lady... not even close. :/ :/ A beautifully, thought-provoking offering of free verse -- thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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I wish I could say I agree with that last line, Diana, but I'm not there yet, my lady... not even close. :/ :/ A beautifully, thought-provoking offering of free verse -- thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Ok, hahaha! we will discuss once this mess is over with! LOL! I hope it is somewhat different though. A lot of hate going on in our government right now. So bad for us. Thank you for you!! xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You are so right and what we see right now, this is crazy and the politics was never there to help - very innocent betrayed
and left to rot
in the backyard
of our society
is now experiencing
their freedom through
the efforts of
God's soldiers.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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You are so right and what we see right now, this is crazy and the politics was never there to help - very innocent betrayed
and left to rot
in the backyard
of our society
is now experiencing
their freedom through
the efforts of
God's soldiers.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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We hope that there are children being rescued from ungodly things during this time. It will be interesting what it looks like on the other side of this. appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from l.raven
Hi Diana, I pray sweet girl for those who are losing so much...it will take awhile to get back where we were...but we will...with God's help...I believe that...politician's had destroyed our government...our constitution...or laws...sigh...love your poem my sweet friend...very well written...and I love the picture...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Hi Diana, I pray sweet girl for those who are losing so much...it will take awhile to get back where we were...but we will...with God's help...I believe that...politician's had destroyed our government...our constitution...or laws...sigh...love your poem my sweet friend...very well written...and I love the picture...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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It looks so devastating to not only our people but our economy. This may end up quite different than how we moved through life before. Thank you for taking time to read!! xoxo
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yes it does...I pray for everyone out there...that God keeps them safe...and you are always so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Thank you very much for your serious and uplifting write.
You captured my attention from he first word to the last
Thank you for sharing.
Peace and God be with you.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for your serious and uplifting write.
You captured my attention from he first word to the last
Thank you for sharing.
Peace and God be with you.
Cookie
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much. I believe there is far more than just a virus going down right now. I can?t wait to hear what miracles God has bestowed on us. xoxo
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Your very welcome. I agree with you. only time will tell the whole story
Stay blessed and safe.
Cookie
Comment from lyenochka
I do hope that there will be justice for all the children who have suffered under the hands of adults who should have been there to protect them. Great words and glad there is starting to be change.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I do hope that there will be justice for all the children who have suffered under the hands of adults who should have been there to protect them. Great words and glad there is starting to be change.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Way too long but timing is everything. Keep praying for us all. xoxo
Comment from judiverse
I wish we could say that politics is over as we know it is dead, but politics is still interjecting itself. It certainly will take a long time to heal, if we can ever recover. When we do, I believe there will be such a demand for movies, restaurant meals, and other goods and services that the economy will start booming once again. Yes, we need to pray for our leaders. I think they're doing the best they can given the hand they were dealt. It's good to see private corporations chipping in, too. All the best to you as we go through these difficult times. Your insights are excellent. judi
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I wish we could say that politics is over as we know it is dead, but politics is still interjecting itself. It certainly will take a long time to heal, if we can ever recover. When we do, I believe there will be such a demand for movies, restaurant meals, and other goods and services that the economy will start booming once again. Yes, we need to pray for our leaders. I think they're doing the best they can given the hand they were dealt. It's good to see private corporations chipping in, too. All the best to you as we go through these difficult times. Your insights are excellent. judi
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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We have control over the Federal Reserve Bank now, happened just the other day.
What I mean by politics won?t be the same, is that the crime is going to get cleaned up inside and outside the government. Maybe it will finally run as it?s supposed to. For the people! Thanks for taking your precious time to read! xoxo
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You're very welcome. Hope that comes to pass. judi
Comment from Drew Delaney
I think many things will be over as we knew it, Diana! Your words are mind boggling but as many are expecting it to be. To recover the economy as it was is a dream. I think we are just at the beginning of possible rationing of food and such. Let's pray not!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I think many things will be over as we knew it, Diana! Your words are mind boggling but as many are expecting it to be. To recover the economy as it was is a dream. I think we are just at the beginning of possible rationing of food and such. Let's pray not!
Drew xx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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It will be interesting to say the least. We will have to be sustained as a people to get back up and running. No fast solution for sure. :(
Thanks for stopping to read and be safe! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is telling us that this virus interrupted our life and made everyone realize how precious life is and to never take life for granted. Prayers to the health workers and our leaders. It's a wake up call.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Your poem is telling us that this virus interrupted our life and made everyone realize how precious life is and to never take life for granted. Prayers to the health workers and our leaders. It's a wake up call.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you! I think there is also more going on that we don?t know publicly about yet, but for sure it will not be the same on the other side of this virus. Be safe. xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
This is spot on, dear poetress. Politics continue though, and the anti God leaders sound like the very voice of Satan. It's as if his identity is being revealed and motives exposed out in the Son shine. It so obvious what is going down here, and many don't want to see it. John the Baptist's words ring true yet again, "prepare the way of the Lord, remove the stones of hindrance, make new paths for your feet." Jesus comes again and we must prepare ourselves. I see that you are!! What a blessing you are to me!!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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This is spot on, dear poetress. Politics continue though, and the anti God leaders sound like the very voice of Satan. It's as if his identity is being revealed and motives exposed out in the Son shine. It so obvious what is going down here, and many don't want to see it. John the Baptist's words ring true yet again, "prepare the way of the Lord, remove the stones of hindrance, make new paths for your feet." Jesus comes again and we must prepare ourselves. I see that you are!! What a blessing you are to me!!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I totally believe God is doing a lot of clean-up behind the scene. On a micro level, we may not see as much change, but on a macro level, this will require us to ?reset?. It will be very interesting to see things unfold this next couple of weeks. I mean, wow, we have the Federal Reserve under our control now and not the wealthy bankers! Please stay safe, and keep writing! I?m so far behind on reviewing with all the distractions going on in my own home. If they are not rescuing the children, I will be very surprised. :). Much love and constant prayer for you and yours! xoxoxo
