Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Mist, has the right set up and sees the altitude clouds as a veil which keeps our interests 'peaked' as we observe from below.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020

Thanks for the read and review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Or their secrets, yeah...? :) ;) This is a great offering for this so very limited format contest - thanx for sharing your vision and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020

Thanks for the read and review.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery of the mountains and mist.
Nice little touch of alliteration.
Perfect picture to match.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thanks much for the encouraging review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The imagery is very good,
especially, "floating mist."
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the scene with
only a few words.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thanks for the read and the feedback.

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Apr-2020

You are welcome.