Knowing that the hand
A naughty love song3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Well is starts out like a sweet love song but ends up in lust and erotic content. It is still well written song, but I don't think it will be played on any radio.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Well is starts out like a sweet love song but ends up in lust and erotic content. It is still well written song, but I don't think it will be played on any radio.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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thank you Joan no I don't think so either lol
dip
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You're welcome.
dp
Comment from MARIANNE GI
I liked it so much, it had a dose of humor at some point....I wonder if you are still with this girl or it is something from the past that never faded.. Again, nice work
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I liked it so much, it had a dose of humor at some point....I wonder if you are still with this girl or it is something from the past that never faded.. Again, nice work
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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haha Nah i got way too big for her lol
Hi Marianne it was just a fun write as possible song lyrics i just sent it to a hip hop /rapper friend as a joke lets see what he comes up with. if you know and musicians please feel free to let them see the lyrics it might be a rock song an R and B who knows
I haven't a musical bone in my body when it comes to playing and my voice isn't that strong but I do love reciting my poems at open mike nights and on community radio.
heres a youtube clip a friend did on her guitar of a poem I wrote after retirement called time on my hands.
She has used a collage of random shots from my facebook page before my account was disabled for self promoting my one man show last November on private message.
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This song is AMAZING! And the photos too!! :-) You are a party animal too as I see!! ha ha ! I am so sad I don't know any musician, if only I knew! But because we always meet new people, all the time, I will have it always in my mind! Thank you for sharing this song with me, I was honored!
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thank you Marianne I have many many more
i am revisiting my 5000 or so poems and looking at the ones i could possibly convert to song lyrics and adding a bridge to Being house bound now with all this virus thing allows me the time and the boredom to do this lol
Comment from Jen Vasquez
Pretty good writing a different approach in interest while it's trying to stay busy on quarantine that's cool first one I read that had any sexual contact learning keep up the good job
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Pretty good writing a different approach in interest while it's trying to stay busy on quarantine that's cool first one I read that had any sexual contact learning keep up the good job
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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ooh naughty me!
I am trying to lighten up this whole corona virus fixation.
As much as that is important and dominating our lives sometimes a bit of lighthearted ness eases the seriousness of life.
thanks for the good review much appreciated.
dip
