Covered
A Free verse poem...19 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Again, so deserving of a six. This is lovely. Absolutely and a call for us to be MORE, even in our solitude. Beautifully written, flowing, optimistic and hopeful. Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Again, so deserving of a six. This is lovely. Absolutely and a call for us to be MORE, even in our solitude. Beautifully written, flowing, optimistic and hopeful. Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you, I?m just happy you wanted to read. xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
During times of stress, we reveal who we really are deep inside. It can bring out the best in us, or the worst. Love covers a multitude of sins. Let's spread the love...
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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During times of stress, we reveal who we really are deep inside. It can bring out the best in us, or the worst. Love covers a multitude of sins. Let's spread the love...
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Let?s hope the best comes out. I don?t think it?s going to be the same on the other side of this. Please take care! Sending prayers for you and yours. xoxo
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem and the music was awesome.
You captured my attention from the start.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem and the music was awesome.
You captured my attention from the start.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you! Trying to keep the good thoughts ahead of the bad. Stay safe! xoxo
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Your very welcome.
peace God be with you.
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written encouraging and uplifting poem about taking the time while there s not much we can do about our situation to reflect on improving ourselves and eliminate hatred and sadness and start lifting our spirits.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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A very well-written encouraging and uplifting poem about taking the time while there s not much we can do about our situation to reflect on improving ourselves and eliminate hatred and sadness and start lifting our spirits.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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This is perfect time to walk in prayer the whole day long! :). Thank you for relating! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
Amen and amen. This is exactly where I am. It is good to look up and behold Christ. Our faith seems indispensable these days. I thank God continually throughout the day. Life is so precious yet, it seems we are on the the very end of time. Christ's return seems so close.
Jackson and I are trying to enjoy our surroundings and each other as as much as possible as well as FaceTime our grandchildren daily. He is working on much more than me as I am not able to make those trips into the shop very often these days. I'm writing more and storing it. I have more faith-based poetry than normal. It must be you and God.
Sending you my best today as always for this wonderful piece,
Sal xoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Amen and amen. This is exactly where I am. It is good to look up and behold Christ. Our faith seems indispensable these days. I thank God continually throughout the day. Life is so precious yet, it seems we are on the the very end of time. Christ's return seems so close.
Jackson and I are trying to enjoy our surroundings and each other as as much as possible as well as FaceTime our grandchildren daily. He is working on much more than me as I am not able to make those trips into the shop very often these days. I'm writing more and storing it. I have more faith-based poetry than normal. It must be you and God.
Sending you my best today as always for this wonderful piece,
Sal xoxoxoxo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Awe! No, my dear, you are His vessel too! Both needed in this a spiritually starving world. Thank you for keeping me posted on your journey through this. xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are wise and honest words Diana and I sincerely hope that everyone can follow this guidance inside their homes to keep the harmony, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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These are wise and honest words Diana and I sincerely hope that everyone can follow this guidance inside their homes to keep the harmony, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you! So sorry for delay in response and reviewing. It?s become quite busy with 7 (incl. 5 month and 4 year old bits-LoL) people in a lengthy confinement period! More cooking, more talking, more laundry! But wouldn?t change a thing! They are a great comfort! Sending prayers your way. xoxo
Comment from Minglement
Amen, Diana. Thank you for sharing these beautiful. inspiring thoughts in this time of distress and uncertainty. Beautifully expressed thoughts of concrete things we can do. Well done :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Amen, Diana. Thank you for sharing these beautiful. inspiring thoughts in this time of distress and uncertainty. Beautifully expressed thoughts of concrete things we can do. Well done :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much! Please forgive the delay in responding and reviewing! My home has become quite busy with 7 in the house. 2 ore children! LoL so happy you could appreciate this! xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You are so right, if we complain about being confined at home, we are forgetting about the ones that have no home, or that will never return home. I realy like this part:"At this time,
we must come together
as one in our seclusion
and be like-minded in prayer
so that we may be
covered during this crisis
and "passed over".
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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You are so right, if we complain about being confined at home, we are forgetting about the ones that have no home, or that will never return home. I realy like this part:"At this time,
we must come together
as one in our seclusion
and be like-minded in prayer
so that we may be
covered during this crisis
and "passed over".
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much! I?m sorry for late response! My home has become extra busy right now! More cooking, more talking and more laundry! Haha! Appreciate you enjoyed and for your positive feedback! xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful meditation! Thank you for sharing and exhorting us to remember that we are covered by His powerful and healing wings. I liked your reference to Exodus as in being "passed over!"
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Wonderful meditation! Thank you for sharing and exhorting us to remember that we are covered by His powerful and healing wings. I liked your reference to Exodus as in being "passed over!"
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you! My daughter mentioned to me that she thought this all reminded her of the original Passover story.
Sending prayers! xoxo
