Covered
A Free verse poem...19 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
what a wonderful biblical allusion and call to prayer, my lady -- love that repetition at the beginning in there.... Thanx for sharing and sorry I'm so far behind! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
  |
what a wonderful biblical allusion and call to prayer, my lady -- love that repetition at the beginning in there.... Thanx for sharing and sorry I'm so far behind! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
-
Ha! you are not any farther behind that me, my dear!! I'm happy you appreciate this one! xoxoxo
Comment from victortouche
And here I've been
trying to stand out
my whole life.
Gabriel, "Hello?"
"Over here..."
Ok, so I still got a
sieve for an Id.
Humility is a very hard lesson to accept/learn'agree with.
Oh, yes, your poem was quite good.
LOL
victor touche
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
|
And here I've been
trying to stand out
my whole life.
Gabriel, "Hello?"
"Over here..."
Ok, so I still got a
sieve for an Id.
Humility is a very hard lesson to accept/learn'agree with.
Oh, yes, your poem was quite good.
LOL
victor touche
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
-
Awe! thank you so much! Sorry for the delay in responding. Seems being confined to home has been much busier than I thought it would be. (i'm the only cook in the house - haha!) Appreciate your beautiful review and stars! :) xoxo
Comment from Anne B Francis
Nature we can not fight we are warned time and time again take care of the earth this is what you have been given - a great gift that humans in their greed have nearly destroyed.
Open you eyes and look at the wonders - pray God looks down and sends a cure that we may all have learnt something from this terrible sickness.
God Bless all
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
Nature we can not fight we are warned time and time again take care of the earth this is what you have been given - a great gift that humans in their greed have nearly destroyed.
Open you eyes and look at the wonders - pray God looks down and sends a cure that we may all have learnt something from this terrible sickness.
God Bless all
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Thank you for reviewing. My daughter inspired this as she mentioned it resembled the original Passover. be safe! xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your good advice during these dark times. I admired your focus on being a "better person" and coming "together". Take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
Thank you for sharing your good advice during these dark times. I admired your focus on being a "better person" and coming "together". Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Thank you Joan! I hope you are well and safe. I know it is difficult for some to get along with others when our ability to move freely is affected. Trying to keep the good in front of the bad. Sorry I an a little late in responding. xoxo
-
Be strong and well- Joan
Comment from Ricky1024
"Covered"
This talks about isolation time yourself the virus and finally?
Redemption.
I just had a post come up on my cell phone youngest victim 6 week old child to get the virus.
I like how you nailed it in the end by bringing the cover which was the title to the very end
And I and I thought I was the only one that knew that trick!
Ricky
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
"Covered"
This talks about isolation time yourself the virus and finally?
Redemption.
I just had a post come up on my cell phone youngest victim 6 week old child to get the virus.
I like how you nailed it in the end by bringing the cover which was the title to the very end
And I and I thought I was the only one that knew that trick!
Ricky
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Thank you, LoL!
Another baby too I heard and more younger people than the media promotes. Just be safe please! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful free verse. This is a time that requires a lot of thought and patience. I fear that there will be an increase in the incidence of domestic violence when people are cooped up at home. With faith and prayer, we'll get through this. I just hope the answers come quickly. judi
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
Beautiful free verse. This is a time that requires a lot of thought and patience. I fear that there will be an increase in the incidence of domestic violence when people are cooped up at home. With faith and prayer, we'll get through this. I just hope the answers come quickly. judi
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Yes, adults and children are at risk of abuse. :( Lots of people fearful with no means to feed their family. So we just try to stay in prayer as we go about our day.
Thanks for taking time to read. xoxo
-
You're very welcome. I hope we'll soon see the worst of the virus is over and pray that the kids are being cared for at home. judi
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yes, this reminds me of the blood that was put over the doors of homes so that they would be spared. I agree that we be spared and our families in Jesus Name!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
Yes, this reminds me of the blood that was put over the doors of homes so that they would be spared. I agree that we be spared and our families in Jesus Name!
Drew xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
My daughter inspired this because we were talking and she said, ?Mom, this all reminds me of the Passover story.?
And it really does. Thank you fir reading. Stay safe my friend. xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
Wish I had a six for this, my friend. You have nailed the positive direction all humanity needs to take. (If only!) We can be at peace, even now, in the Lord's hands. Earthly problems will not last forever. Take care, Diana, and stay safe. xo Janet
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
Wish I had a six for this, my friend. You have nailed the positive direction all humanity needs to take. (If only!) We can be at peace, even now, in the Lord's hands. Earthly problems will not last forever. Take care, Diana, and stay safe. xo Janet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Thank you Janet! Sorry so late with this reply. Home is quite busy with the stay home order. Appreciate you relate to this piece. Be safe! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What wonderful advise stated in your poem. I find, too, if there's no complications or stressed feelings, we feel much better about ourselves and the poetry that we write.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
|
What wonderful advise stated in your poem. I find, too, if there's no complications or stressed feelings, we feel much better about ourselves and the poetry that we write.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
We all need to keep in our fore mind that we are children of a mighty God! Peace is ours to have. Thank you fir appreciating this! xoxo
-
Diana, thank you always for your uplifting thoughts. There's pone thing about writing we have to make a plot into a conflict sometimes. I think this virus is enough of a conflict...I pray that things will get better. Thank you for being here and understanding.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Diana,
Thank you for a timely reminder in these troubled times.
Isolation, seclusion, lock downs,life threatening viruses and loss of faith and hope all thrust upon us at the speed of light... well almost.
Your poetry is a glowing light and such a positive beacon and may we all find solace in its meaning.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
 |
Hi Diana,
Thank you for a timely reminder in these troubled times.
Isolation, seclusion, lock downs,life threatening viruses and loss of faith and hope all thrust upon us at the speed of light... well almost.
Your poetry is a glowing light and such a positive beacon and may we all find solace in its meaning.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
-
Thank you! We all need to remember whose child we are! Peace is ours if we choose, and important to keep the good in front of the bad. Stay safe! xoxo
