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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from John bailey
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doctor Ricky, this is very well written and well versed, I have followed you tor a time, as always you are spot on.you know my take on this, God has poured out the vial of death and destruction upon mankind in all the earth, only through prayer of repentance and mourning will this vial be lifted, the earth and all that is on it belongs to God. now I mourn with you.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Yes Jon I truly believe somewhere but I think the vile is filled with more than just destined destruction?
    Can't trust these Chinese people that are communist they hate us Americans!
    So let's not add a little sugar and spice in that vial perhaps something a little bit more appropriate?
    Pure evilness!
    Thanks,
    Always and Ever.
    So damn smart and so damn clever!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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This is a strong piece and one that begs to be shared. The wording and the way you displayed the piece is excellently stated and a message for todays times

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    yes and I first clicked on that and Wikipedia and I saw it was covd 19 my first thought China okay spread by young 19 year old girl and she will become a whore.
    there's no stronger way or words to describe this event it's massive and shut the Earth down we don't spin we don't rock we don't play outside the internet is dying at this very second no more stock market I feel sorry for the poor fool that goes out still I'm clustering socializing because that's how they're catching it!
    these words by mr. T would not be any better used in this situation!
    'I pity the fool!'
    Thanks,
    Ricky.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well, now that is quite the take on the COVID-19 ... personfication at its finest and most dramatic, I would say! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing today!;)

now but s a whore --> now but as a whore

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Thanks and I think I should add this to it not that it's not powerful but Mr T would say better when it comes to socializing.
    'I pity the fool!'
    Thanks,
    Ricky