Oh Life!
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Comment from Rondeno
Are you suggesting that God gives you everything you want? Always? Does He do this for you alone, or for every believer? Does this mean there are never Christian martyrs? Do Christians never lack anything?
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Are you suggesting that God gives you everything you want? Always? Does He do this for you alone, or for every believer? Does this mean there are never Christian martyrs? Do Christians never lack anything?
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for the feedback...
you at your own assumed something i cannot help...
it was a representative work... it happens to almost everyone...
anyone can ask god anything but he gets differently or in different order as god wishes to provide, that means god gifts come to the person in different order or different manner or different state or status and not exactly what one wants and it happens to everyone for we want everything in our own style and expectation but we get what we deserve for so when we get it appears to us different from what we asked for...hope this would help you, if not ask for further clarification, it is good to assume but not wise to assume something wrongly, hope you never find my writing gives you the impression that you cherished...
thanks once again for the feedback with questions
i appreciate your question, you have right to think...
Comment from MM lives on :)
Dear Almighty Alcreator of the pen, fear not what others may say about your writing and fear what they will say once you are published..the beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you hold a metaphorical talent my friend. My saying is keep on writing and never give up!
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Dear Almighty Alcreator of the pen, fear not what others may say about your writing and fear what they will say once you are published..the beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you hold a metaphorical talent my friend. My saying is keep on writing and never give up!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
Comment from c_lucas
Parents seldom as a child what s/he needs. They make the choice for them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Parents seldom as a child what s/he needs. They make the choice for them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Robert Loy Gonzalez
this is a very different type of poem. however I found it very easy to understand. I read it without reading your notes and understood the words you were saying without even knowing. I tend to read poems out loud so maybe that is why. I like it and the uniqueness of it. good job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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this is a very different type of poem. however I found it very easy to understand. I read it without reading your notes and understood the words you were saying without even knowing. I tend to read poems out loud so maybe that is why. I like it and the uniqueness of it. good job.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR INTELLIGENT AND HONEST REVIEW.
Comment from amada
I think I get what you are saying in here, somehow cryptic but I like it anyway...my brain needs work! I think is all in the power of our gratitude and giving thanks for everything.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I think I get what you are saying in here, somehow cryptic but I like it anyway...my brain needs work! I think is all in the power of our gratitude and giving thanks for everything.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR FAIR REVIEW.
Comment from ravenblack
syllabics are wrong - not the form you purport to be writing. 'yond mort' " mystic ord" - c'mon, I need a mystic orb ( crystal ball) to make sense of this.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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syllabics are wrong - not the form you purport to be writing. 'yond mort' " mystic ord" - c'mon, I need a mystic orb ( crystal ball) to make sense of this.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
NOW YOU MAY RE-CHECK SYLLABLES.
HOPE YOU WOULD FIND OK
SORRY I CANNOT ACCEPT YOUR SUGGESTION.
Comment from visionary1234
Al, if you're going to tell us about your strict syllable count then you surely need to HAVE that strict syllable count my dear! re-check and let me know if you re-work, ok?
:)S
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Al, if you're going to tell us about your strict syllable count then you surely need to HAVE that strict syllable count my dear! re-check and let me know if you re-work, ok?
:)S
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It nicely gets us to ponder our origins. Also thank you for the notes, I am still learning and it helps a lot. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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This is an interesting piece. It nicely gets us to ponder our origins. Also thank you for the notes, I am still learning and it helps a lot. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Adri7enne
I guess everything is a matter of attitude. When one feels abundant, abundance is generally added onto you. Good thing you left author notes, A. Would have been pretty difficult to make sense out of 'yond mort," or 'mystic ord." It's good to feel you have a direct link to the source. Good on you!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I guess everything is a matter of attitude. When one feels abundant, abundance is generally added onto you. Good thing you left author notes, A. Would have been pretty difficult to make sense out of 'yond mort," or 'mystic ord." It's good to feel you have a direct link to the source. Good on you!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW.
YOU KNOW BRAIN-WORK IS EXPECTED IN POEMS.
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You think? LOL!
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Interesting work you wrote .. do like the way you add footnotes helps explain the format and also the abbreviations
Not my favorite but I do learn something with each read of what you write
Thank You for sharing
TK
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Interesting work you wrote .. do like the way you add footnotes helps explain the format and also the abbreviations
Not my favorite but I do learn something with each read of what you write
Thank You for sharing
TK
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR HONEST REVIEW.
